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Everything ahead is text to speech and I didn't prove read any of it so be warned. TLDR: It's sad that Wolf's story ended, but it was an amazing story.And I can't wait to read your newest work You know, I finished your other 2 novels before this and and actually found the one about the game world. I can't remember the name. I'll talk to my head even though I loved it. But I'm gonna go back and re-read it, but I discovered that story about 300 chapters into this story. And i've been here since about the two hundred chapter mark and it has been a great ride honestly. Hell, even the part that I absolutely despise where Wolf gets thrown into the demon room. Isn't that bad and the whole story is amazing. I just decided to read it because unluckily for me. When I last caught up, it was at 980 chapters and then I went to go leave it alone for 2 or 3 months, hoping I'd get around another 400 chapters worth of Wolf shenanigans to read. And I was a little bit sad when I realized that the novel ended shortly after I decided to give it a break but I think it was a great fitting ending. Even if I would have loved to see a couple more Wolf stories or maybe even more.Talk about everything happening in the covens. Honestly, there's a lot I would have wished happened with this story but I think it was an amazing read. I feel like you're getting better with endings too as well. Because in your other books, they were very abrupt. Honestly, and even in this one, it was a bit abrupt at about 10:50 chapters in. I still thought I might have a couple 100 more to go. Not just 100, but the ending was a nice built up with Wolf going away from the Forest Grove. And moving himself away from most of the world's problems. And focusing on his life and for that being the end of the novel, I think it was a great decision after all, a few ended the story with Wolf being in the middle of. Is the Forest Grove still helping people out with no children of his own?I would have felt unfulfilling. I can't wait till I wake up tomorrow and I get to start reading the legendary Beast tamer or whatever your new novel was called.I think it's already at like 500 chapters at the point of me writing this.So i'm very optimistic because honestly i've loved all your books. Ask comments getting pretty long. But that's mainly because this story made me really enjoy Wolf's character and the ending of this novel feels like a parting with a friend that you know you'll never see again. But at least if I really need to I can come back and re-read this story again because my God this is probably moved up to. One of my top two favorite novels on this website.

My only complaint with this book is that the author is too thorough. I believe that when he was first writing the novel, he realized some people were complaining about a few tiny plot holes. And I'm not talking about anything major or something like that. I'm talking about something very obscure and tiny. That most people would completely forget, but some maniac would remember and the author took that to heart and decided that the entire novel needs to be a novel every page if that makes sense.. It's not bad but when a tournament arc lasts for 500 chapters It gets. A bit tedious. Don't get me wrong.I absolutely love the story.I've finished it within a month of Reading. It because I read it when it was first I like a 1100 chapters and then I let it build till 2400 chapters.And it's a really great read.I love it completely but i'm also not going to defend how atrociously long some of the arcs are. I find myself skipping 52 ten chapters at a time when a Is uninteresting development happens because the author attends to Expand on almost everything. There's nothing wrong with the novel.It's very well written there's Almost no grammar errors.And there's no gender swapping like an a lot of other eastern Novels because this one isn't machine translated. And honestly, the slow writing is something to expect from the author since his previous book worm sovereign, which I loved more than Walker of the world, but it got put on hiatus, but that's fine. It ended in a no case spot and this novel is a great successor to it. At least spiritually, in my opinion, but reading that novel, you realize that the author does a lot of explaining in a good way. But. It still is a lot like a lot of the fight. Scenes will sometimes go on for 2 or 3 chapters. And that's not necessarily a bad thing. But when I already know the main character's skills? Since the training montages are not skipped. And I basically know everything about our main character. I usually just skipped till the end of most of the fight scenes since they're pretty boring anyways and you're not missing out on anything really. I wouldn't say there's plot armor in this story.Since it's written to the fucking story that there's a giantspider that is above celestial in terms of cultivation that is protecting The main character and it kind of feels like it in the story.Our main character goes through quite a lot of trouble frequently.Honestly, but he gets on death store.Not that frequently, and when he does while you will be worried for him.You're not worried that he'll make it out of it dead.You're just worried that.I wonder what to happen to him from the fight because he's obviously not going to die. Dad, I started rambling a while ago and I probably should have ended this review a lot sooner.But once again I gotta say, I love the novel.I just think that it's a shame that I can skip ten to twenty chapters During certain bits certainly not all the time.I don't do it for 400 chapters at a time.Usually but it's still a shame that I can do that and not miss anything contextualized or anything that was integral to the story

My biggest grape is the main character's personality and how, after being betrayed by his entire family experimented on cruelly and gone to torturous amounts of pain.Not even 5 chapters later, after murdering someone for the first time and feeling the natural human reaction of regret instead of dwelling on any of the guilt that could be there even if they are horrible Killing someone does horrid things to the mind, but not even 5 chapters.After his many murders either indirect or direct, he's a bubbly ray of sunshine.Who is blushing and stuttering at the first sight of a girl his age. I don't know about other people, but that already completely took me away from the novel. Making it feel like the author didn't know how to writethe main character's personality and instead has him be whatever fits the plot at that moment, as in he was a sociopathic killer with no care for others. Someone destitute and filled with the need for revenge. 2 deciding that the main character, all of a sudden, is stuttering blushing and all other things just from the mere touch and look of a girl his age and then him having no guard against the commander that picks him up.Also makes it a bit weird. After all, the people who literally raised him and he trusted with his life betrayed him.But this random stranger from this giant.Organization that clearly isn't good at its job.Can 100% be trusted with 0 reason?Not two beyond guard. It's just something like that. That makes it a bitdifficult to read. After all, the main character doesn't have a personality. It feels like it feels like he's molded to whatever the author thinks will make a scene flow. It's sorry if I doesn't make too much sense.I don't quite know a better way to put it other than there is no defining personality for a main character. I'm not even gonna talk about the stupidness of the trial that takes over 40 chapters to do when we've only had 20 chapters with our main character. Instead, I'll say that this novel is probably for some people. I can see why someone might like it. But the main character's personality and the lack of care put into the story makes it difficult to read. I've seen other reviews. Talk about it and after skimming through some of the other chapters on pirated websites. I can 100% say that this story very heavily takes major and critical pieces from. Bloodline system

Only the third time this joke was mentioned and it's already gotten old

TLDR: Maybe it's a good book.Maybe it isn't the author wants to Piggy. Back off of Harry Potter and describes the first technique, the main character gets as being directly from the Harry Potter world and the authors on words.And that just took me out of any interest that the story might have had. I was willing to give this book an honest try. But I just can't bother to read a piece of work when the author just blatantly uses other books for his novel. And I don't mean take a few ideas musically. I'm literally says in the book. The Harry Potter world and other things like that. Talking about the techniques, the character gets another stuff and honestly it just makes it so uninteresting to read at that point, even if it's an adequate description for something. It completely takes me out of the mood to read it when the author who's writing a fictional story needs to base it off of another fictional story. Maybe that's not the best way to put it, but honestly. Just the Reliance on Harry Potter, slang and the way the system works along within the main character, referencing Harry Potter all the time, it made it so I couldn't keep reading. Obviously. I'm exaggerating with all the time. But you know, I really didn't make it to chapter 3 because it got so uninteresting right? After I saw the author described the mind obscuring technique as from the Harry Potter world that I had 0 interest. Keep reading. I tried to finish the chapter and I couldn't because there was just no intro. That's in the story from that point on. Because at that point this is just gonna be a fan fiction from Harry Potter. And someone can tell me that they've read. The chapter 800 and it's a very different story than Harry Potter. And I wouldn't care because first impressions matter a lot. And this novel went from something that sounded kind of interesting with a weird character's name like link to I can't even bother to read this because if he's a Chinese author referencing Harry Potter techniques and other things like that for his wizards. It makes me wonder if the name link is connected to Nintendo's link from high rule.But I digress in the end.I couldn't even get past the third chapter because there was no interest on continuing the read.

Just based on how much I love is that a Wisp. I'm going to give this an obligatory. 5 star reviews and wait for more chapters to build up and once there are more chapters. I'll come back and give an actual review, but till then place a review because currently I've never been disappointed with your books

I would say that the worst part about this novel is the humor. It's clearly a pretty serious novel at a lot of parts but instead of it being written like a serious story.We constantly have gag jokes thrown in which ruin the entire vibe of the story I feel. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for jokes here and there in a story and even characters being kind of assess 'cause that's the comedy, the author's going for but it's hard to want to keep reading when every other character is a gag character like a f****** Skunk, that's called something like Chad skunk is its species name, so the author has the character name at gigachad, and that's funny at first, but reading that name over. And over again as it's mentioned later on.Really brings you out of the mood for the novel.Cause the first time yeah , it's funny , but the third and fourth time the joke is just old and it's not enjoyable. The worst part is.It's pretty good system.I like both other novels written by this out there.But I feel like in this one.The author is trying too hard with the humor to appeal to a zoomer audience. Like I wouldn't be surprised If the words scibidi toilets or Rizz or other shit is in the story. Don't get me wrong.Everyone has a different sense of humor and stuff.But I really feel like this novel doesn't know where it wants to be either humor wise or setting wise, because we have very serious issues going on in the novel very serious moment and then we have the most out-of-pocket left field humor that makes 0 sense.Don't get me wrong , obviously this whole Novels supposed to be a f****** joke like it's clearly supposed to be a very commedic novel, but it's also supposed to be novel. That's fun to read, and it's not fun to read when the jokes feel like the only thing that's progressing in this story. Cause we're already over a 150 chapters. In and our main character has had 0 power improvement. S obviously that's gonna be hard with the restrictions put on him. But we don't even have a plan of how the main character is supposed to remove those restrictions.Yet he's not even working towards either.He's treating his human life , which is only about a hundred years Max sineas not allowed to rank up like he's gonna be able to live for thousands of years and it's gonna be able to think about the problems later. There's also the whole supposed to be 3000 years old. Essentially with a very logic driven thought pattern. But I feel like half the time the logical leaps the author makes are a bit too stretched to make sense and also the way the author writes the main character. Gets really hard to connect with him at a lot of times because instead of feeling like a player in the game which he's supposed to be, he feels more like someone who's not a part of the situation and that's not bad, but usually when a character has that they have power to back. Them and at least in his current situation and the foreseeable situation. Our main character has 0 power behind. Damn

No better way to get a bunch of people to skip a chapter than to leave us on an unnecessary cliff hanger. Literally almost 20 chapters of build up for ray's wakingjust to have him wake up. And then instead of finishing that start the next chapter and probably the next couple without any mention of him is just a God off a way to Force your readers to not want to read and at least such what's happening with me. I was already skimming through chapters. When he wasn't awake, but now I'm just outright skipping them.

would be a hoot

Honestly , that's what's pretty interesting about this story because instead of someone inheriting a giant lineage of a forgotten magic , we have someone who has had to build up the magic himself. We know that The main character was the Pioneer for dark magic. He was also the one that created almost all of the spells that he uses. So of course, he's still experimenting one human lifetime. Is enough to get through a regular science subject and become a complete master at it? So I can only imagine that something with magic, which would be akin to science and Justice complex, would hold the same findings. It makes it interesting to read. Because our main character still has more to learn and discover, and he knows that which makes it even.