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If you stumble across this novel, just like I did, I can only tell you to give the story a shot. The novel starts off with quite the dark settings and you can feel the dread and despair just by reading the chapters. WIth all that said, let's get into the meat of this review. CHARACTERS: In the first 20 chapters the character number is low and they are mostly side-kicks. As for the MC he is roughly fleshed out. You can get a basic idea of what and how he is, bit there is a lot of room to evolve in the future. WORLDBUILDING: We don't know much about this world, but it is some kind of blend between our world and a fantasy world (Note: this is the starting world) As for the pace of the strory, it starts off pretty slowly, but ramps up after chapter 17ish. All in all, a good novel if you want to follow a MC that isn't just an ice-cold, arrogant young Master that is perfect in every little thing.
I'll eagerly follow the story until then. Can't wait to see the world you have in mind :) On another note, please don't feel discouraged if it seems like the story doesn't get any traction. The few of us that are here will follow through with the story.
Hey Vsauce, Michael here.
it's possible, through the canales that connect the ears with the back of the throat
the author reads all coments on his works, this is why I posted this. I'm too lazy to tell him this on his server
Awe you do realise there are some men who aren't attracted by wamen. (I'm not among them though)
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Amazing work. The author really outdone himself with this one. The writing quality is almost perfect imo, though the chapters are extremely short ( around 1000 words per later chapters ) though it makes up with a very stable release schedule. The story is very interesting, it get's you hooked up very quickly ,it's pacing is very consistent and it doesn't feel stretched. The characters are pretty well done, each having it's own personality and they don't tend to steer away from their morals, though changes have to occur in order to survive in their new world. The world development is good, and it allows for further changes.
This work is yet another amazing novel of Awe's and it shows. This novel is as exciting and enticing as his other novels, maybe even more so. The writing is fluid, easy to understand and extremely vivid, each scene or fight is very well defined and it's pace is not too fast, nor too slow. The story development is arguably slow, but there is no moment in which you will be bored with just fillers. The character design is good, the author perfectly describes the feeling and emotional state the MC goes through, making it easy to relate. As for the other characters, they are also well defined, each with it's own personality and motivations. As for the world development and background, Awe didn't spent a lot of time on it, and it unfortunately shows, but to be frank the world building doesn't have to be excellent.
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