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I mean, the time reference; past, present, future... I already read the older version, and there were a few chapters consistent with the tenses, and it was a good read. Since this was a rewrite, I thought you should know.
The tenses are still jumbled here, boyyo
Thank you. I'm good now. Body pain's gone. Just a few coughs. Another thank you for the inspiration. I was planning to go premium next chapter, but I'll delay that. It's my way of compensation for not delivering extra chapters. Although this work hasn't garnered more audience, I'm still willing to give it a chance.
I might consider once we reach 100 chapters
Everything will be bigger in the future. Humans too with their superior diet. We can't normally compare ourselves to our descendants ahead of us. Tanks, artillery and other conventional weapons of war can be very, very effective when mechs are smaller since their armors can be penetrated, and their arsenal not as destructive with their bigger counter parts. I'd just call the smaller ones power suits. Also, our genre is sci-fi, so anything that is possible in the future will be put here.
Haha. Been reading in my spare time. No worries. We'll come back stronger.
Thank you!
Thank you so much! I have a less friendly writing environment nowadays, can't get in the groove. Gonna adapt sooner. New chapters later or tomorrow.