MrNightmare

wdymn, doesn't make sense to me. drops his own blood then drinks it, is flowing ing his veins ???? doesn't make immune to it why does he need to drink it

out of 100 how much u rate it? and Is worth reading , clich scenarios ???? is original or copy pasted (similar to mtl clich ) 🤣

what the f author, he not she or her change it

it's technically copy paste but different names and etc, only background is different, I hope to see it goes to different direction , since you said your inspired by ..... but you can't copy paste all the time, I could understand the beginning etc.

author, your writing confusing as f, I can't understand your writing at all, well you could understand after wrecking your brain too much but ain't worth it. especially fighting scene and conversation as previous comments the concept it very good

I disagree with you, cultivation level keeps changing

I hate relationships between mc and his wife and family etc

can someone explain? I would appreciate it

mc flesh 😁 probably

there is Improvement , good job author 👏