why does everyone do this in a fic "can't hear it's like I'm underwater" it's so easy to hear underwater unless you mean to hear someone who is talking underwater otherwise it's obvious what they're saying

read the non plagiarized version on space battles by rictus titled path of ruin

read the non plagiarized version on space battles by rictus titled path of ruin

titled path of ruin

path of ruin is what it's called

read the non plagiarized version on space battles by rictus named path of ruin

read the not stolen version on space battles by rictus this fic is his and is being plagiarized

this fic was stolen from rictus on space battles don't follow it

this story Is stolen from rictus on space battles

Don't read this the author stole this from rictus on space battles under the title Path of Ruin he just changed the title

you're a liar this is path of ruin by rictus on space battles you plagiarized this

forgot to say that it's really great to see fallout fics and that I don't mean anything I said to be insulting I just have trouble forcing myself to get through chapters I'm sure it gets better in the later chapters just my OCD acting up

I personally do not read stories where the first chapter does not catch my interest but that's just me. idk if all the chapters are like the first but it might be a good idea to slowly rewrite the beginning chapters in a better format as you get more experienced

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I love star wars but this right here is absolutely horrible literally just a wish fulfillment novel, which I get it, it's your novel but it's really poorly made and executed and I'm surprised that you have so many views when others are more deserving of the attention.

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