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Darkstep1yrAntwortet auf CobraQuantumye about between ur shoulder blades and waist
Batman then flipped over him. There was an explosion and Croc was launched off right into a kick on the small of the back from the Dark Knight. I had the time to gawk at the expert display in gymnastics before going right back to panicking when…- Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf OnanMaster
the min rank of a red gate is B so it prob went up by 1
She then looked at the sky. "It should be around 5 PM. My shift starts at 8. Tomorrow we will go explore this place and hopefully find the boss. This gate is only a B-rank so you should be able to hold your ground in 1v1 against a monster. Don´t wander far off into the woods and so on. Just don´t be dumb in general." - Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf Esposible
does it have to be paper or would any surface work?
'The conductivity of the essence stones is phenomenal. There should be at least double increase in the power of my spells.' - Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf Augustus_D
Knock off Kaido?
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Anyone know what he's trying to say?
"I must be the most reckless of us 5." Apollo chuckled his eyes beginning to close. "Gen...... ollo....... ickly." - Darkstep2yrKommentiert
Didnt he already enter through the door? How else would he have described his grandfather.
The door opened slowly revealing the figure of the boy and on the other side Lord Rosier looking at his papers "Grandfather-" - Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf SpoiledSecretsShe might be 11 now, but in a year and some she'll learn metalbending, and she'll instantly learn sandbending while out in the desert during 'The Library'. She's an absolute monster, and I'm glad I'm gonna marry her.
- Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf BlazeXII
If ur talking about team Sannin being formed then I think I'm right cause the hokage wouldnt have much time to teach his own team.
"Perfect, now Raiden, take a seat beside Jiraiya, we are about to start the class." - Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf HuntingFateCh 1 Chapter 1- Earth?
- Darkstep2yrAntwortet auf ExodusGaming555
Pre sure this is the timeline here: Tobirama Hokage and sannin in academy WW1 Hiruzen takes on sannin End of WW1 Tobirama dies and Hiruzen is Hokage WW2 Sannin become famous
"Perfect, now Raiden, take a seat beside Jiraiya, we are about to start the class." - Darkstep3yrKommentiert
+1
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Author's last words 😭
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Alright we're at a crossroad here, this can either become really good or destroy the story (crossing my fingers for the former). Btw the war in America shouldn't be following hero conduct cause it's basically ww3. I feel killing should be the norm there but not brutal and unnecessary ones, because they shouldn't hold back in a battlefield where they could die. Just my opinion.
Ch 22 The Cass - Darkstep3yrKommentiert
June
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Isnt he like 12? Or am I remembering his age wrong?
"Well getting into the school and going in leisurely is easier and I have to put in less effort, but do I really want to go back to high-school?" I muttered I myself. - Darkstep3yrKommentiert
I've noticed you switch between first and third person really quick. You should stick to one consistently otherwise its awkward to read
Emerging from a giant crater in the road 50 yards from Izuku, is a bloody and beaten Madara. My entire upper torso has been completely exposed with my armor completely destroyed. Blood is now flowing from multiple cuts on me and my torso is covered in bruises. - Darkstep3yrAntwortet auf UrAverageSkeleton"Hmmmm that is quite cool sounding and catchy too."