Killerofthegod443

A very interesting read, the characters are interesting, the development is interesting, especially the world that seems more and more solid and complete. I can see that the author is trying very hard to create something of quality for us readers.

"I'm sure this is a Chinese novel; in the next chapters, Haru will have his body possessed and will be fighting against Tiskuyomi or something like that."

"Author, were you inspired by a Chinese novel or are you translating?" 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Alive

honestly, if you had made MC only have the powers of a viltromite, and not the species, it would have been great.

Author, I love the concept of your novel, but every time the MC says he's human, and kind of pathetic, not only does it make him seem like he needs humans to make sense of his existence, and even worse, honestly, I just watch your romance by force of will. Please don't be offended, like I said, I just don't like the parts mentioned above.

ChatGPT

honestly, just say that nolan is from the royal lineage of the viltromites, and kill the leader of the viltromites.

honestly, I don't know what to feel, with MC joining the collision of planets, you know he has a virus capable of killing viltromites, imagine living with your ally, knowing that when MC shows up on the other side, they will use on mc, not only on him but on future children.

author in my opinion, remove the system, leave only the sea of ​​blood. It will be much better for you to write and develop your kg.