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My list of favorites starting from zero! Leviathan by DelayedInspiration The Monster by Arawn D. Draven I'm Luka in QQ

2019-03-14 BeigetretenBrazil
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    ADD4 months ago
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    This is stupid, there's no way his mother wants him to be a hero

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    ADD5 months ago
    Antwortet auf DizzMe

    Great answer

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    ADD7 months ago
    Antwortet auf DV_5559

    I just know that the quality hasn't dropped, and I'm not an expert on this but Dumbledore and McGonagall's actions in the chapter are still very faithful to their characters. I would like to praise the independence you give your characters, all the fuss that Cho and Hermione caused seems like a normal reaction to anyone reading it, but authors would not normally allow this course of action, perhaps by overcomplicating things. I can see that you're not too afraid of giving independence to your characters and that's a rare trait, I have expectations. It's strange that your work has so few reviews, maybe the synopsis is the problem, the part where a figure like the six paths intrudes must put off many readers, I don't want you to change your story, but Sasuke could have been defeated by other ways, even naruto defeating him before he had the chance to use his mangekyo wouldn't be a problem, although it's not a very interesting defeat, at least it doesn't alienate anyone. I'll keep reading anyway, tough luck for those who gave up over something so silly

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    ADD7 months ago
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    It's not a good story, after all, the whole collecting girls thing is a dirty topic. But it's interesting, and even if a girl joins the harem, it doesn't seem like she becomes loyal to the protagonist, the author still hasn't created artificial feelings to make things easier and Sasuke remains focused on his revenge. Apart from the boring beginning with a figure like the Sage of the Six Paths meddling to ruin the protagonist's plans, so far I feel like it's worth reading.

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    ADDa year ago
    Antwortet auf SOMBRIO

    you can see in the title that it's naruto's fight, just skip it

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    ADDa year ago
    Antwortet auf SOMBRIO

    He is rewriting naruto, he had fights other than naruto and sasuke fights. Let's just skip chapters, there's no harm in that

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    ADDa year ago
    Antwortet auf I_dont_believe_it

    Or he could just use salt...

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    ADDa year ago
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    bah