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BookWorms007

BookWorms007

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2019-03-01 BeigetretenGlobal
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    BookWorms0074 months ago
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    Honestly, I didn't like the novel. The writing quality is excellent. However , this novel is not everyone's cup of tea. The MC is far too weak and soft. He even spares the killers of his followers. I lost count of the number of times the MC was about to be killed and was rescued by some plot armor. It keeps getting repetitive. There is no feeling of reward or accomplishment at the end of story arcs because the MC is still painfully weak and there is no tangible rewards. The story is still very confusing and i feel the author intentionally keeps the readers in the dark most of the times . A lot of new characters makes the story all the more confusing. There is no humor and the story is a tragedy . It might attract those readers who wish to see their MC suffer most of the time. But personally, I am not one among them. The writing style and quality is very good though.

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    BookWorms0075 months ago
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    A very good novel . The MC is strong and is not a pervert. The only fault that I can find till now is how the MC already knew about the existence of various strong entities. Yet was complacent all the same. He knew there were strong ability users yet did nothing to improve himself . He knew he was just a slightly bigger fish in a pond yet remain unmoved and unmotivated to improve himself . The MC does acknowledge his mistake in the story but it ruined the immersion for me. It is a grave mistake to make especially since the MC has apparently played the game hundreds of times already. The author could have used some other plot line to induce character development and shouldn't have made the MC look extremely foolish just for the sake of it. I also feel the villains are let off with slight punishment. They should have suffered more since the crimes they have committed are unforgivable

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    BookWorms0075 months ago
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    The novel has good potential. but there are certain flaws which should have been avoided from the get go 1) Way too much fourth wall breaking. It simply ruins the immersion.I understand that it gets better later on. But most readers use those initial chapters to judge the novel and might leave . Please try to edit out those parts. Better late than never 2) The novel gets way too confusing from the beginning itself. Poor grammer compounds this effect . Try reading and rereading the manuscript and correct those errors before finally publishing it. 3) The character of the MC . He is too passive and weak willed . I would suggest the author to correct those errors or you might fail to attract enough audience to meaningful numbers

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    BookWorms0076 months ago
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    A meh novel. The MC is just a wimp. Despite being the 6th prince , everyone walks all over him. They do not suffer any repurcussion whatsoever. Even a maid ridicules him and gives him no face. Male lead struggles to act against his fiance despite all her provocations .The MC is just a simp and a pervert in disguise .

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    BookWorms0077 months ago
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    It is a pretty solid novel. The MC is strong, takes risks, not afraid of showing his strength and is not a pervert. There is cute romance with it as well. Keep writing author. Cheers.

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    BookWorms0078 months ago
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    A depressing novel. There are no/ minimal fulfilment moments despite the long suffering by the MC . I read novels to relax my mind and enjoy the evening. But after reading this novel, I felt like having a brain aneurysm due to the depressing atmosphere. People who feel that they are too much happy in life and requires something sad to compensate for it, please feel free to read this book.

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    BookWorms0078 months ago
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    It kinda saddens me to write this review. I loved the novel initially. But as chapters went by, i began to understand the reason why this novel receives such bad reviews 1) constant Pov changes which makes the readers hella confused 2) Too many side characters and too much chapters are dedicated to them . 3) Not much romance between MC and heroine. The MC has no good qualities, he does not have any expressions and is like a log of wood 4)MC has too much hero complex and keeps on helping others 5) MC was nerfed to the ground . He started out strong but then became far too weak 6)Too much backstory ( too much dragon stuff - Not interesting) I Dont even think that the author reads our reviews anymore. He keeps making the same mistakes again and again despite a lot of reviews saying the same thing. At this point , iIfind no interest in continuing this novel further.

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    BookWorms0078 months ago
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    The novel is far too slow. The author keeps repeating the same stuff albeit differently every few chapters . This is why I suspect A.I to be involving in it's making. I read upto chapter 250 and the MC has not awakened till now. Keep in mind that most of his classmates are awakened and can utilise mana in some form or the other. But every people keep on praising the MC saying he has huge potential when in reality, he is the weakest of all. He lets his classmates walk over him without any repercussions ( Keep in mind that MC is the son of a very famous powerful figure). But nobody is scared of him. He does not take any revenge . Most of the chapters are pretty squabbles between his classmates. Nothing much going on. Don't bother reading the novel . I don't think the author even bothers to read these comments and try to make his novel better.

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    BookWorms0078 months ago
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    I don't know how to feel about this novel. The writing quality is excellent. However , The portrayal of MC is far from ideal. He is much stronger than some of his opponents ( other clan heads ) . But he keeps on engaging in petty squabbles with them. He could crush them if he wanted . Yet, the author drags the chapters on minor sqirmishes that could have been solved pretty easily. Nothing just happens in a lot of chapters. There is no feeling of reward or achievement in the end of these numerous chapters. The MC keeps getting unlucky and suffer. What is the point of reading these chapters if you can't resonate with the MC and end up getting more frustrated at the end ??. The author might have intended to use it for comedic purposes . But it does more harm than good. Did I mention that his family members are all plain stupid but now the MC has to go around fixing their mistakes ?

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    BookWorms0079 months ago
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    Not a lot of chapters have been released . But here is my 2 cents of review. The writing quality is okay. But I seem to find the main male character pretty weak. He stammers all the time when speaking to the female character. He gets lead around by others, have no strong opinion on himself and has no redeemable qualities. What made the beautiful female main character fall in love with MC is sti a mystery for me. You could have described him in more detail stressing about his good qualities. But all we get is a Nobody being loved by the most beautiful girl in the campus . Pretty unrealistic if you ask me.