St_Pat

Lv3

Every fanfic is wish-fulfilment. Fav. Genre: Grimdark, LitRPG, Reincarnation, Self-insert, Strategy. Fav. MC Char: Amoral, Cunning, Paranoid, Perfectionist, Pragmatic, Ruthless, Scheming, Secretive

2019-02-18 BeigetretenIndia

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St_Pata day ago
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Indeed, Ian lost. He has arm was broken due to his staff and her sword colliding with such a force it broke his arm, but not hers.
DC: Rose Of Death
Anime und Comics · VQuintessence
St_Pat2 days ago
Antwortet auf Veinydique
Hell, people even went as far as coming to Gotham to riot under the banner of human health matters or something like that.
DC: Rose Of Death
Anime und Comics · VQuintessence
St_Pat2 days ago
Antwortet auf Burgers
Charity!
'I know his weakness, but it's very troublesome to exploit it... I have to work harder, so much harder to create it...'
DC: Rose Of Death
Anime und Comics · VQuintessence
St_Pat3 days ago
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Author should differentiate between 'thoughts' and 'dialogues' with different quotations such as, use single quotation for thoughts and double quotation for dialogues. The way MC keeps speaking out loud his thoughts and secrets, in a ninja village, is dumb at best. The best outcome would be quick death, which won't be happening, because, he will be spending rest of his life under T&I departments mercy.
Ch 5 Progress
Naruto : Hidden Cloud
Anime und Comics · ImagineMaker
St_Pat12 days ago
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"Do you see me, do you see what I am, a Vampire has you at his Mercy! I could ravish you, I could rip your throat out and bathe in your intoxicating blood or gorge myself on it…Vampires, Werewolves, Demons…are REAL CLARY AND YOU NEED TO SEE THAT!!!" by the time I finish speaking I'm yelling at Clary who whimpers as I tighten my grip on her wrists and she writhes underneath me maybe in a bain pointless attempt to throw me off of her.
The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)
TV · Shane_Town
St_Pat13 days ago
Antwortet auf Damian0481
Agreed.
"I did, not only did your kind attack my little brother, but you attacked my son." I reply coldly as memories of raising a week old Gar to the wolf he is today all the struggles of parenthood and the rewards of it like watching Gar on his first hunt. Or tracking prey with him in the forest to having him save my life when he came running into the battlefield, while I grab Ansel's face and force his mouth open using telekinesis. I rip the venom sacks and fangs from his mouth, making him scream in pain and rage.
The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)
TV · Shane_Town
St_Pat13 days ago
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The girl screams as her baby comes out a boy, something evil and dark wells up inside of me and I lift the newborn by the umbilical, enjoying the woman's screams as Lagertha blocks charge, as I wrap the umbilical cord around the baby and Lagertha hold down the mother as I move behind her and strangle her with the dead baby's umbilical cord while pressing the baby's corpse to her face.
The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)
TV · Shane_Town
St_Pat13 days ago
Antwortet auf Bloodawn
Agreed. It's like, they don't know the concept of butterfly/ripple effect.
'I just hope…my actions today won't alter the future too much.' I mutter in my mind as I turn to look at Mikael seeing he's calmed down. I stand up and offer him a hand up.
The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)
TV · Shane_Town
St_Pat13 days ago
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This is largest/biggest sentence I have ever read. 😅
"Bekah…You know I had a twin sister, and the last time I saw her…in person it was here, that day she was taken from me…and I almost died to fever…this place is a constant reminder that I lost someone who I shared a heartbeat with…someone who's pain I shared with her…Bekah she and I might as well have been considered one being…not to mention…there is a lot of bad blood between your mother and I…she and Father don't know this but…the day I was born, I was fully conscious…your mother was especially cruel and vile…saying that father should drown me..as she'd never care for me…there have been numerous instances where she has been rather vile and cruel, she could have been cold and indifferent…but no she made every effort…to make me know that she hates me and would only be happy when I'm dead." I tell Rebekah softly but can see that even Lagertha was affected by what I was revealing to her for the first time as well. Sure she knew Esther had an absolute revulsion to me, but she only knew to a certain degree and not that she hated me from birth, I felt both women put their hands on my knees and give a light reassuring squeeze.
The World Walking Original Siphoner (SI, OC)
TV · Shane_Town
St_Pata month ago
Antwortet auf Kira_Vallery
Nope. speaking to oneself/themself is one of many signs of mental instability.
"They must be heartbroken when they learn of my death. I wonder what Leila's reaction will be. Will she cry? And my mother…"
One Piece:The Lust System
Anime und Comics · Yass_Odyssey