Ikaru5

Great story but confusing as fuck! Like, I get it, but try to build up one character before you do a head jump into the whole multiverse plot line. The reader gets barely a chance to immerse himself into the plot, before he is suddenly overrun by so much plot that it gets hard to follow, well, unless you’re a marvel fan that knows the plot by heart. I’d recommend he goes back to chapter 15-20, and rewrites the whole setting into one that develops slower and in a single world, but that’s my opinion. Surely, others like the plot how it is, after all, it is not a bad plot just one that is hard to follow.

Exactly 👍🏽 all Systems will eventually become corrupt, and I am fully understanding this statement, and supporting this idea. But my issue is with the eventually part! See, I don’t have to go out of my way to actively make other countries fail, make other people’s life hell, or steal their resources! This kind of mentality is something very unique to America! Petro dollar, as an example, resources in other countries have to be exclusively traded by dollar because the USA demands so. Or what about weapons of mass destruction?! A million Iraqis dead, but the only country that has dropped nuclear warheads on someone else is them. See, here’s the thing, the truth is so obviously glaring that it punches us daily in the face! Think of it as America being S.H.I.E.L.D, and some people, aka Hydra(Blue and white) have warped and infiltrated them! Be it Diddy or Epstein, Gates or Musk, all of them have actively and are actively ruining the System and lives. I am not hating all Americans for living in ignorance, but I do see how flawed their system is. They’re literally attacking other countries and spouting non-sense about defense! Like in which reality is it okay for me to go to my neighbour’s a house beat the living shit out of the husband or wife, and play the victim if they retaliate? But in our reality Americans believe this is how things should be, either because they’re brainwashed, or entitled. Anyway, I wish you all the best. There’ll always be someone hating something for some reason. As long as you keep the hate to a minimum and rational it is fair game to hate. Don’t hate people for ideological reasons as they tell you, see their actions, and conclude if they’re evil or not, and then start by dislike don’t jump to hate, give them chances, and after being disappointed 100+ times hate can be considered. (This is my understanding of how to hate, hope it explains and helps understanding one anothe)

That is true indeed all governments eventually fail, but with the Americans havin the CIA and going out of their way to sabotage elections, well, it is just another can of worms. Oh, my family originated from Afghanistan.

That is true indeed all governments eventually fail, but with the Americans havin the CIA and going out of their way to sabotage elections, well, it is just another can of worms. Oh, my family originated from Afghanistan.

Comes with the heritage. See, I am a believer of actions speak louder than words. The American Government has proven over and over again how much of an failed System they’re not only to other countries, but even to their own people. Be it healthcare, education, or global policies all of it is one big mess, just one bad day away from either a mass shooting, one bad day away from some CEO being shot, or someone dropping an nuclear bomb. It’s in my and I believe most people’s best interest if the Americans finally make use of their second amendment for something good, and start a revolution. And honestly I have to fight myself every day, and tell myself all the time that not all Americans are the same, despite having lost so many family members due to their backwards politics. So, yes, I am not a big fan of the USA, unless they show with actions that they are a changed people.

So?! That was an exemplary redundant reply. Transmigration includes the word trans! Re-incarnation includes Re! The difference is that when you start as a baby you always reincarnate, but if you start mid journey you use transmigration! You can say what you want but it does not change how it is perceived by the community. And pls do not drop a listed reply as if you’re telling me something smart. 🤨 Or I will drop you a list about what the difference between an idiot, a moron, and a potato is.

Yes she is there listening to his rambling’s and thinking sth. like da flying squirrel in Merlin’s underwear what’s going on here! Oh, it is tea time I will come back later and ask him about this! And then she forgot about it because the British tea is amazing!!! Just think about Boston the whole place had a tea party and they became famous for it despite using cold saltwater to make tea.

She used excessive force! She shot him like 7 times or so.

Yeah, great ideas 👌🏽 maybe I will use them in my next fiction, or maybe you can write a fiction too, and I will sit down an read it. 👍🏽 looking forward to how you gonna tell the tale.