Wishkun

I like the new profile Picture!!! He looks cool. Not sure if you had someone helping it or its AI, you can add the name of the title too for clickbait. 😎

Happy New Year Drei!!! Have fun! Thank you for the chapter!!!

Yessss! and I like this lady! quiet and by her self. no extra shit! you might wanna introduce her and her background too, I wanna know. 😍

Yay!!!! more involvement!!!! *ship ship ship*

I like this family head. True to his nature. after all, papayas are nature!

mma lessons

thank you for listening sir.

hahahahha, no bro. not in a sense of hard to follow or understand. ummm, let me explain like this, you can try putting emphasis on the characters and their background or maybe like a quick peek. maybe some monologue. it's becoming cryptic in a sense that chapters are following the same flow (not in a bad way)

No errors so far. but it's becoming cryptic.