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And who are you, the proud Lord said
He's the family head
Huh, mathematically correct use of parentheses.
I only needed to read the word warlock and I was on board. The story seems interesting but some more detail could be put on Issie's character. It may be because he seems weak but he seems quite ooc for me. But maybe it's just the fact that this leylin has not experienced the magus world. Hope to see some great keikaku from Leylin and all the best.
How about a celestial/star dragon fruit itself, can have powers of stars and what not along with reflecting his background. This would allow fast travel through air and you can probably do some black hole shenanigans after awakening, along with gravity though the constraint would be he will only be able to attract thing to himself or on set point he could place like a singularity from Mass Effect.
Quite a similar start however things will change very soon.
Sorry about that I just type the chapter at once so I sometime type Lelouch instead of Leylin.
There is one instance that has stuck with me in the book. He stated how everything he does he has a purpose. When he spends time with his family he knows how happy he would be and if he spent researching he knows that too. That way he does what he feels would bring him the most returns.
Much smarter, he starts as a mediocre person but rises all thanks to his mind and ai chip. I would say is the archetypical cold detached antagonist who cares only about his goals and what would help him achieve it.
I will try to, I want to explore Leylin himself as a character. My name is reason enough. So if I write after this Leylin will probably still be an mc but probably in a different world