just wanted to point out you spell it djin here and djinn elsewhere!

Enjoying the read so far, people have complained about it being slow but personally i like the pacing. There are a few words every now and then that don't fit, if I get time I may go back and add comments. Otherwise if you're looking for a good read, i cannot recommend this enough

loving this so far

*Esteemed

The poor king is going to be so surpised

A one of a kind story, highly worth the read!Unique premise and compelling narrative lends give you a lot to bite your teeth into, cannot recommend this enough. I secretly think the author is a cultivator

The story is great so far, though I would like a little more regarding the poor necromancer. I have a problem with the author using the word testemant way too often and they often mistake gun for spear but otherwise an enjoyable read

please make that meticulously mashed materials in a mortar just for the alliteration

it's a kitchen staple, not an ingredient imolike oil and salt

I assume this is meant to be 170C, at 70 you wouldn't even get a sizzle

probably need someone fluent in English to go through and clean up the start a bit but actually a really good novel

like 8 chapters that are just variations of eachother?? this is being promoted?

Jesus Christ what kind of parents raise someone who treats a disabled family member like that good god

bro is blind

so you could, in theory, brute force this to make a divine grade wooden stick by constantly refinining it

Can't wait for them to meet Puffles

I love you so much author

fair, only worth naming weapons that have a role in the story

take my power stones

love it