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TheDarkDark

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2019-02-02 BeigetretenAustralia
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  • TheDarkDark
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    "It's been so long," she voiced, her arms shaking as she clung to my shirt.
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    TheDarkDark16h
    Antwortet auf General_Frozt_8890

    You like?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: Retribution (1)
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    It was pretty good until the odd gender-bending thing. I knew you wanted to do something cool here but it just went the wrong direction and made things awkward.

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    As a fellow writer of another Borderlands fanfic, I would say yours needs more work but it does deliver on quality. Personally not my taste but I can see the appeal. Due to this, I'll give you a five-star review due to obvious bias but having looked over the fanfic elements I do particularly find the sentient system to be off-putting. Overall keep going and don't drop, the steady stream of chapters is a great way to keep yourself motivated. I belive that with the right motivation this could be a staple.

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    Easily one of the most inspiring fanfic I've come across which made me want to write mine. Feel like there could've been done here but otherwise a solid real for how long it is. I'll give it a solid four-point four due to the lack of updates and character development.

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    Depending on your perspective of original characters and alternative universe you can easily denote it as a four at max. I find this particular fanfic to be fun and climatic at certain points. It's not for everyone, do be sure to read it at your pace and be warned of the later elements of the story. I'll give this novel a four-point six out of five.

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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark2d
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    screw it early chapter

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: Retribution (1)
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark4d
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    Thpughts anyone? I don't even know how many people be reading

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Wanted (3)
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  • TheDarkDark
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    Mk 1, T11 no. 2

    It stood at two metres tall with a helmet and visor installed for enhanced combat. Bulky in design, the prototype Mk 1, T-11 was supposed to be test driven by Joshua although circumstance told otherwise - It would seem the king would take first pick. 
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    Mk 1 T11 no. 1

    It stood at two metres tall with a helmet and visor installed for enhanced combat. Bulky in design, the prototype Mk 1, T-11 was supposed to be test driven by Joshua although circumstance told otherwise - It would seem the king would take first pick. 
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark5d
    Antwortet auf Trey_phillips

    Random, cause alot of the characters in Pandora are non-named.

    Carrying two batons and a large heavy Vladoff machine gun, he appeared to be highly augmented. He wore a leather mask, its material switched from numerous faces. Packing a muscular build he was imposing, a haunting monster that would adults to sleep. 
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  • TheDarkDark
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    Help a brother out and leave a review

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Wanted (2)
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  • TheDarkDark
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    Mk 1 T11 alternative

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
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    MK 1 T11

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
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  • TheDarkDark
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    Joshua Graham "The Iron sentinal"
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  • TheDarkDark
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    Alexander "The Iron Monarch" 
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark6d
    Antwortet auf Whadyamean

    Did Joshua Graham not give it away?

    "You are my legion!"
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark7d
    Antwortet auf oppaidaisuke_69

    💀

    [That is why your "Cargo" has been removed. We've had this discussion many times and I doubt it will be the last. Please proceed to the metamorphosis]
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark8d
    Antwortet auf Onxio
    Age: 12
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  • TheDarkDark
    TheDarkDark8d
    Antwortet auf Onxio

    He currently like this due to age

    Age: 12
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