TheHermitKing

If you could put out like 300 chapters by tomorrow that would be great. Love it

I know that this is just a translation, but there are only like 5 lines of dialogue in the whole chapter. I had almost forgot why I stopped reading Chinese novels

Vast* network

Make a railgun with this. That covers the piercing attack he needed

This story had quite a bit of potential. Even though the author gave the MC a ridiculously OP quirk, I would have still enjoyed it if the novel progressed in a way that didn’t just follow cannon, which is what should have definitely happened. The MC is a mentally unstable man, who has been through multiple ‘maturation’ instances that the author could have used to shape him into a much more focused and logical character, but instead the author just made his personality completely flip 180 on multiple occasions in order to force the plot. The author spent something like 60 chapters trying to develop the characters and their relationships with each other and the world, painting the picture of an MC who is completely distrustful of outsiders, is anti-government/hero, and is already as powerful as All-Might before canon starts, and then in like 1 chapter, Nezu offers him a special license and some connections if he goes to school like a good little boy and all of the character development flies right out the window. Plus, from the moment he starts school, he suddenly becomes a literal brat, nagging at teachers about how he doesn’t have to be there and how much better he is than everyone else. It’s such a dramatic shift that I can’t even continue trying to read this. And don’t even get me started on everybody crying all the time. Even by the time I stopped reading, multiple characters, including the MC, STILL break out in tears at a memory or reference of his parents. It’s been over 10 years already, are you telling me that heroes, and an adult man who has lived two lives still aren’t mature enough to deal with death? They are so emotionally stunted that they can’t even grieve properly? The tone change was so jarring that I don’t think there’s any way back from this without a complete re-write. Would not recommend reading this

Speaking of class trees, I don’t know if this was a typo or if I misread it, but the Undead reward he got allowed him to have access to Undead classes without needing a race change, and he hasn’t got any related classes to pop up for it

Depending on how many titles there are, this could definitely be way overtuned, but I think it would be more fitting of a title to grant +2 additional stats on level up instead of just flat, one time stat boosts

Why has he just turned into some angsty brat? What even is the point? Wanting to get kicked out? He literally went against his entire character buildup to finally join just for the benefits, and he’s just acting like a little kid?

Lame. Kinda just threw everything about his character out the window. Unless your end game plan is to turn him into some selfless hero, it doesnt really make sense for him to go this route

No wonder you’re getting so many negative reviews. It’s just depressing, still, even this far in