ForgottenHope

I thought this was dropped i was bummed out because this was an actual story i genuinely look forward to when it got any updates.

Medium harem in DC vs vampires? That's like a kid limiting himself to 2 candies in Willie Wonkas Chocolate Factory.

Dude I gave up on your story the moment I saw that you were cutting out pages of your own book. So why would I come back to read this just because the synopsis was edited. Like that doesn't tell me anything if the story is still cut or not. Like you're right you could have changed things, but you also could have not and you just edited your synopsis. It's a 50/50 on my part, I read this and I enjoy this in its all uncut glory or I read this thinking something changed because the synopsis changed and it's the same butchered story.

Honestly this whole brother thing didn't make much sense. I don't get why he took it out his anger on his brother when volk is his enemy. Kinda sounds like this guy was already twisted in the head and once he lost everything and went crazy his twisted self showed more.

He should just pick the Lucky one out of the six and leave. He can make his own goblin army with 1 female if a goblin having babies like rabbits exists here.

You are the first author I've ever seen put anything related to Castle in the sky in a story. Saw this movie when I was 4-5 and it will always hold a special pace in my heart.

Man none of the gals he's got feel like women, they all feel like little girls. He should try his luck at more mature women like Erica, Ena or Liliana. Someone more mature that we'll take his status and his advances on them seriously. Cuss these girls treat him like the perverted neighbor next door.

I don't blame her for taking smoking as a stress reliever but as someone who had an uncle smoke 24/7 throughout all my life that shtt smell is unbearable. Smoking also leaves your mouth looking rotten, so it's extremely unattractive and a turn off for me.