KumThrone

Ew forced gay.

See, What I don't get is why the Author makes a Character unwilling to KILL even if the life of others are in danger. It makes so sense, Especially in Hazbin Verse.

I hate Armyn.

I respect your writing, but this is just getting tedious. I came here to read about the MC, not Lore dumps and nerfs for the plot.

First we nerf the MC, Then we disregard the MC in exchange of Creative lore dumps in the form of a story. Is this about the First Soul, or about The War in Heaven? Quite frankly, Are we even needing the MC at this point? What's special about him now? THE God thrown away into a mere C'Tan Prototype body. What now? Are we going to follow his "Oh SO FABULIOUS" adventures across the universe HE made? Sure he can Manipulate the warp, Woo-di-doo... And that changes what? He practically lost his place/And anything special once you nerfed him.

Mandalore, Its a great starting place. Full of Fit Warriors and Cultures so diverse that it's almost natural.

Was it necessary to kill Morgan? I get the theme and all, but like its our favorite boi morgan.

For sure could make him an "High Angel" in tomes and scrolls passed down by the Faith. An "Angel" told to Uplift humanity and appear in dire situation. The Angel of Responsibility mayhaps?

saving Jenner and the CDC building would be a great boon to Leon and the camp. plus all that military grade equipment outside the CDC is peak.

I'll just read the present chapters, Prologues are boring and useless... unless you wanna know about some irrelevant things.