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I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .

2018-12-09 BeigetretenUnited Kingdom
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  • MRgold1
    MRgold111d
    Antwortet auf Potato_killer

    fixed it thanks [img=recommend]

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    Antwortet auf MRgold1

    Also the candidates get a skill every 100 years not decade so every 10 years a wave happens and on the 10th you get a skill so 80 years going by as said would be 8 waves and no skill by but another 2 you would get one.

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    Antwortet auf Oscar_Trencone

    that's the time dilation, which was just for the beginning that over now the only thing that doesn't change is the candidates who will still be physically the same after the game is over. As for the review, I knew this was a problem about 40 chapters in. But I enjoyed writing, so I just went on ahead. Luckily, I can just be lazy and say that 10 years went by, and nothing happened. This is gonna be a big novel that needs a lot of cleaning up. Luckily, some of this stuff won't be around for long. Thanks for reading as well.

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    Antwortet auf Harem_Seeker

    I don't know about popularity, maybe because some people do things to increase popularity as I just upload it here and on Royal Road. But as for your review, thank you. I appreciate it, and you should try writing if you want to. I'm not special, and I'm happy with how this novel has gone so far, so just give it a try.

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  • MRgold1
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    Antwortet auf Harem_Seeker

    so I a rixis goes out and kills an animal for food every day that no points given put if it makes a big discovery. Or fights a strong monster from outside rixis lands, then it will get points for the hunting side. it's more the risk factor that gets you points.

    "So I'm not getting points for them hunting, but killing an enemy or some type of significant research or act gets me them the best amount"-Jack
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    Antwortet auf Harem_Seeker

    yeah, I'd rather you do. I'm not perfect, and I use grammarly, but some things still slip past, so thank you. If you do, it only makes the work better.

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    Antwortet auf Harem_Seeker

    thanks fixed it 👍

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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    I have an idea of something like them yes

    Ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
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    MRgold124d
    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    no it would dissappear but they could be blessed by a god of decay or something similar

    Ch 163 Devoured by loved ones
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    Antwortet auf Cathulhu

    fixed it thanks.

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    Antwortet auf Drago_20

    yeah, they do get an attack force, but I didn't include that since I'm gonna for a chapter after Jack's is over.

    Ch 159 The other disasters
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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    it's a super continent with small island chains surrounding it, and the candidates' distance between each other varies. Some are closer than others. I should probably find a way to make a map of it.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    correct, so they are very close. There is another that is close aswell but they will have at least a few biomes in between them. they'll start appearing more in chapters once the tribal stage is over. That's when candidates start battling and scheming.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    1. yes, they would be raised if they were killed after the undead appeared, not before. 2. there are multiple native tribes and this is a spoiler, but kingdoms, but I'm keeping those for once. Jack reaches that stage, which will be very soon.

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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    I remember that the sand striders face worms in the first wave, so maybe those pigmen were in another chapter. But they would have been killed by either the rixis or the undead roaming the desert.

    Ch 157 Blood soaked sand
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    Antwortet auf Ashtarot

    All I can say is that he created them, so some of his personality will be mixed in, and they're all friends, so they'll act similar to one another. I think there's a bit of Jack in each of them, and they reflect differnt parts of himself.

    Ch 155 Moving forward
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    Antwortet auf Dante_Giordano

    yeah, but I guess they're evil because there are those who aren't religious who don't attack those who are. while those seen as evil actively destroy and ruin everything they can.

    Many of these groups were fresh and green, but some vertrans were still kicking around. They managed and guided these groups of youngster down the clean and righteous path and vowed to purge all evil in the lands.
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    Antwortet auf VERMITHOR

    New race without any skills or time to evolve and get stronger and is similar to human life spans of the time before modern medicine.

    current lifespan:0-40 max
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    Antwortet auf VERMITHOR

    No lizard men, the creator wanted dragons but couldn't make them at the start, so he is doing the next best thing.

    Ch -7 images of the races
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    Antwortet auf king_jayden
    Ch 57 The second day of the wave part 1
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