jordon

Honestly the most glaring problem with this story is the pacing, not gonna lie it has horrible pacing. Over a hundred chapters spent in a dream, 10s of chapters on pointless small talk that doesn’t drive the story forward at all… yeah that’s an issue.

I honestly hope she doesn’t die, she’s by far the most interesting character and my favorite.

Masterpiece Chapter

Even if the next chapter say oh she enjoyed it, it’s part of her fetish. It doesn’t change the fact that she was unwilling and shouted stop numerous times.

Tayuya or Anko, maybe Tsunade. These or some interesting choices for you to think about. They are all connected to Snake-Boi too, so you'd have some good plotlines and conflicting views between lovers.

That wouldn't make sense honestly, it was stated that her body changed not her mind. if she didn't like dick before why would she now? That inconsistency would honestly destroy the worldbuilding and character you have written so far.