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Nevermind, looks like author-san had plans in mind. I don't really know much about football but I'd say Godspeed is a definite choice. As for the remaining two, I guess the free-kick one(since he's aiming to be a striker) and the the physique one(?) not really sure about the last one. It's a flip between the physique one and the jumping ability for the last one for me.

Oooof. The SSS grade skill was already stretching it for around this time of the story but then you added even more. Man, the MC's already so good even without those but I guess people end up writing themselves into a corner with these types of fics. With this, the next arc would be uninteresting since the U-20 team obviously have no business winning against this monster alone, add to that some other stuff. I guess the only thing that could make things interesting would be the NEL against the coaches.

Just got some rather sh*tty stuff to deal with so I haven't come around to writing as of yet. Just finished re-reading the entire thing and rummaging through my phone to see the notes I've written in the past yesterday. It's in an indefinite hiatus for now until I at least am sure things have calmed down on my side. As for COVID, I've long recovered from that and have been going around places looking for a new work since we moved places. Only two months ago did I get a more stable job 😓

How he treated his relationships, especially the past ones, were really… Yeah, nevermind. Good job author. I gotta give my thanks for the entertaining read, at least the first half.

I've read about 500 chapters and I gotta say, although its good, it didn't really capture my interest enough to continue reading it. The constant timeskips, especially the 3 year one after the academy arc, really soured things in my opinion. Spending years and years just focused on magic, no wonder he turned out like that. Anyways, it's just whatever now and I have enjoyed at least the first 200 chapters so I have nothing too egregious to say here. Just that it's good, that's all.

I have the same problem. It became way less interesting of a read past 550. If he wanted to replace him, why do it 550 chapters in? Thinking back, it's also sad that his master was seemingly saying goodbye more towards 'Alex' than she was to him when she was dying. That's just sad lol.

I personally didn't really like how slow and dragging it felt to read this story. The MC is said to be one from Earth, a normal human who transmigrated into the body of a cultivation, and then he just went ahead and decided that just cultivating for a couple years is a 'good thing to do'. To someone from the modern world, isn't that freakin' boring? Anyway, the story's premise seemed good at first but even after hundreds of chapters, the characters remained flat, mainly due to the excessive amounts of exposition.

I have no working PC since we're just barely scarping by, unfortunately.

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I'm back! I've been so busy for far too long that for a moment, I even forgot this site existed. Anyway, my current game plan is to catch this up with the current release of my ko-fi page. After that, I'll slowly start producing more chapters as much as I can without straining myself. We just moved houses to a different province and, as much as I'd like to update daily, I'm still in an adjustment period. There's also our house I'm helping to build.