You smell like Beta

You got all that nonsense from another fanfic.

Naruto has the best talent in his class. He is the most irresponsible and least hardworking person in his class. Big difference

3.5 years later it is stronger than most Chinin's. A little weaker than Anko, or that's the impression I get. He's stronger than his former classmates except for Itachi and maybe Izumi, who we haven't seen for 100 chapters, but since he has Sharingan it's hard to say.

The antics one encounters here. Is a girl who has been trained for 5 years. She comes from the strongest clan in the world and has the sharingan. What happens here is that you want to see yourself reflected in a perfect MC, you want wish fulfillment not a good story.

I don't remember if I already wrote a review, in any case, if I did it was a long time ago. I think that after 250 chapters I must highlight the positive and negative points of this magnificent story. Let's start with the good. The quality of the writing is simply perfect. The interactions feel very real and the author uses the perfect words for each character. No character from the original work or an OC says something they wouldn't say according to their personality or according to the description we were given about them in the story. Kishimoto failed to explain in detail the jutsu system and chakra control. And this author solves it solely based on data provided during the original work, without inventing anything, just filling in the gaps. The fight scenes. I'm completely serious, but I've never seen such complete fight scenes. When the mc is in danger you can literally feel it as a reader. And the fights are so well described you can picture them in your mind. MC makes use of all his skills to survive, and he doesn't use anything he hasn't learned before. He doesn't get a power up to save his ass. Now let's talk about Takuma. I'd say it's well written, it's kind of complex to explain. He has character, determination, he has his pride and a "noble" heart. Something that remains constant, what I mean is that the author understands how his MC is, and does not make him act inconsistently with himself, he does not present contradictions. And his background has not yet been fully revealed. And his abilities, you can literally feel every step he takes to become strong. It's exciting to see him earn his strength through sacrifice and every skill he learns is important to build him as a shinobi. And of course he will use it to preserve his life. Every time I see him fight I think "Oh, I remember when he learned that". And if we talk about the MC, we have to talk about the OCs. There are quite a few of them, and regardless of their screen time, each one of them is superbly built, there is not one that is exactly the same as the other. Especially his friends and particularly Nenro. And this from someone who hates OCs. But now it's time for the bad. In particular there are only 2 that I don't like one bit and one that although I don't particularly like it, I can understand why you did it. I don't understand why you made Konoha look like the United States in terms of its terrible drug control. Our politicians seem to be trying to increase this problem instead of solving it. And while it is understandable that some shinobi look for a way to obtain wealth through organized crime, it is not understandable that the higher ups do nothing to prevent it. On the other hand, that is somewhat explained by infiltrating Danzo into the matter, so good job. Now, the jutsu system. I understand that jutsu are valuable and it is problematic if someone were to leak them. But what is happening with Takuma is simply a punishment. I may not have a Jonnin Sensei, but that doesn't seem like a good enough reason for jutsu to be so hard to get (on the other hand, it's better than what other authors do. They just go to the library and find C-class jutsu, haha ). Think about it, it's as if a modern army doesn't want to give the best weapons to its elite soldiers. And finally, Takuma's slow development. Yes, it's very slow, although you did it very well. Considering that he hasn't completed 4 years in that world and is already above most Chunin, it seems like decent progress to me. The main problem is that every time Takuma fights other gennin or chunin he encounters a challenge (at least with the Konoha ones). I'm just saying it's not fun when Takuma fights against his ordinary classmates and ends up getting injured in a fight which clearly should have won easily. And that's all, thank you for all the chapters, it shows the effort you put into it. I will try to join your patreon whenever my finances allow me.

Viserys and Daenerys are left alone after several years, I think about 5. At least until William Darry passes away.

This chapter ruined the fanfic. What should have been an entire arc was summed up in a few words. A lousy ending, especially considering it was your only decent story.

This story is good, until the author starts writing what he thinks is an intelligent conversation. I feel my brain cells die every time Itachi and others try to speak "wisely". All those conversations are so silly that they almost ruin the reading. But if you can endure pretentious conversations without dying of embarrassment, then they might give this story a chance.

Seeing how everyone seems to like MC slaughtering his family because a toad told him to, I can understand why the Chinese government banned the story. It really appeals to the stupidest readers. Thanks for the chapter, you really conveyed the sense of desolation there.

I skipped a few chapters. Could someone tell me why Wu Siduo noticed the MC in the first place? I know it's his second life and he was Shreek's student. But why did he have interest in the MC from the beginning? Tell me there is a good reason. Because I feel Wu Siduo's existence a bit annoying in this story. While his interactions aren't exactly bad, they are excessive. A good character can win readers' hearts with few, but well-written appearances. Wu Siduo is absolutely the opposite. To this point alone he already has more screen time than most love interests written by Tang Jia San Sao.

Bye

I thought the father of the Piercer of the Heavens was a rank 4.

The best way to describe this author is as a muddled-minded individual. The story has decent writing and ideas. The problem is that the author gets lost in them. In terms of intelligence MC is even more stupid than Yun Che. The author forces us to eat several chapters showing the MC's pathetic past life, then make it seem like he is the most awesome and handsome guy. He is simply too full of himself. The story has all the negative points of ATG, plus his own narrative screw-ups. Still I would give this story a chance, everyone has different tastes I guess. But wait until MC's sister shows up, you're going to cry blood.

Viltrumites do get stronger as they age, but it depends on the viltrumite.

I don't understand how the hell I forget to rate this work of art. 10/10, not only is this the best RI fanfic I've ever read, it's also one of the best farming fanfics I've seen, maybe the best.

Probablemente por la misma razón por la que yo, un hispanohablante leo la versión en ingles, a pesar de que no hablo ingles jaja. Sencilla idiotez humana.

This is ..... surprisingly good. I like it, the only negative point I can think of is that MC is a bit clingy with Hayley. But overall I think the characters are well portrayed. So, I'm curious, MC has some kind of golden finger? Nothing ridiculously strong, but in that world souls have significant power. An otherworldly soul should have something to contribute. Klaus will be able to do magic? Will he be able to turn wolves into hybrids? Maybe he will be a bit stronger and faster? After all, Klaus is too far behind on the power scale in the future.

All the characters are MC but with a different name. Same attitude and thought process. Always ready to applaud and magnify the figure of the MC. And you tell me he disfigured someone and was not sued? He is not even the only case where there are no consequences for his actions. And sure, Gwen was being developed as a love interest beautifully. But she had to add more, and according to the author she was going to develop all those love interests. But in the end none of them were well developed. Instead of giving a good evolution to one character, you gave a bad evolution to all of them.

People, this story is stolen, and the real author does not charge for his work. The original name is Rhaegar the Ruthless [REWRITE] (SI) ...............