Xavier_Fernandez

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This fanfic is interesting and very well translated (most Chinese fanfic are translated poorly). The protagonist is Jack and it's something new.

I think I expressed myself wrong (English is not my native language) what I wanted to say is that the story progresses very slowly. The length of the chapters and how often they are released is good. The story is good and the protagonist is very nice. I really like this Fanfic but sometimes it seems that it does not advance in the plot.

The Novel is good but is too slow pacing ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Spiderman se supone que tiene un físico super humano (y no, no necesita entrenar para ser superfuerte, eso le viene con la mutación y si luego entrena será para ser aún más fuerte.). Teniendo esto en cuenta, que en el capítulo 2 sea derrotado por Eraserhead me parece un nerfeo innecesario.

One of the best DxD fanfics in this site. The crossovers are realy good. The Mc is a Chad and the powers are nice.[img=recommend].......................

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Wow double chapter [img=recommend]