Gasparian
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Gasparian25dVerschicktVery interesting idea, however the MC's writing is strange to say the least, the MC looks like a teenager with mental problems, he acts in a very strange way, as if he wants attention from people but at the same time he acts like a crazy psychopath.... People's interactions are strange, speeches are halted, it seems like a meaningless monologue most of the time. It would be nice if the author showed some interest in rewriting this ff. I see a lot of potential in mixing these 3 worlds. (review done by google translate)
- Gasparian4mthKommentiertKise could only watch helplessly as Tsuna walked past him, leaving behind a remark, "Losing is frustrating, indeed. But it's a simple problem, just win..."
- Gasparian7mthKommentiert"I'm… Batman!" Yunlong calmly answered with a deep voice.
- Gasparian7mthKommentiertAfter what felt like countless years, the pain at my third eye finally began to subside. One by one, the number of torturous sensations began to decrease.
- Gasparian7mthKommentiert
que isso doidão, alguém cutucou seu terceiro olho?
"ARRRGGHHH" I instantly let out a scream of agony as I was hit by the sensation of a hot iron rod poking into my third eye. - Gasparian7mthKommentiert"Really. I was thinking of something along the lines of Pablo Romani conti D'Souza Pierre Antonio Lafifi, Fifi for short. Well yours seems plausible, I guess"
- Gasparian8mthKommentiert
ele é o cellbit
Quinn West - MC - Solving Riddles, reading tons, brewing medicine. - Gasparian8mthAntwortet auf MrTiemos
your response is 3 months late
"Potions? You are saying that he is brewing medical potions? He doesn't look much older than Harry or Ivy," asked James Potter. - Gasparian8mthAntwortet auf Ototsu_Yume
I'm sure you live in EUA
"Broccoli it is.", I stated with a bright smile. - Gasparian10mthKommentiert
i swear to god, if anyone gets sage mode with this method i'm going to go crazy, the MC eats literal tons of food and it still took years for him to get it, imagine how long it would take a normal ninja without the MC's body to get the wisely that way.
[Since the beginning. The amount contained in each ingredient and food is just enough to make small improvements, but due to the intake of natural energy over the long period of time, the host's body has been adapting to it and retaining a certain tolerable not excessive amount. That is one of the reasons why the host's meals possess a characteristic of improving his diners]. - Gasparian10mthKommentiert
like this?
Tayuya has changed a bit in this time. She has managed to meet a few more people in the village and is no longer under constant surveillance. Although her tough attitude is still there, she is calmer with Karin, Shizune and company. Her body has been slimmed down and both Shizune and Karin seem to be a bit envious for some reason. Tayuya now wears chain mail like Anko, but instead of an open trench coat, she wears a purple kimono which makes her look more elegant and always wears black lipstick. Her hair is still somewhat wild, but it is much neater as it is gathered in three braids that fall down her back to her waist and end with a spiky accessory. As I understand it, these accessories are not really there to attack, but to cause a certain frequency of sound through a special technique of oscillating movement that induces the enemy in a genjutsu in a discreet way. - Gasparian10mthKommentiert
I did it with an AI I thought it was beautiful, I tried to make a version with anime traits but it was terrible
She was dressed in a black qipao with silver dragon embroidery, her hair in a large reddish braid that fell down her neck with a pair of small jade green hairpins, and a light makeup on her face that was barely distinguishable, but elegant. The biggest contrast to her was her lips darkened with black lipstick. (Does anyone dare to build the image?) - Gasparian10mthKommentiertShe was dressed in a black qipao with silver dragon embroidery, her hair in a large reddish braid that fell down her neck with a pair of small jade green hairpins, and a light makeup on her face that was barely distinguishable, but elegant. The biggest contrast to her was her lips darkened with black lipstick. (Does anyone dare to build the image?)
- Gasparian10mthKommentiertShe was dressed in a black qipao with silver dragon embroidery, her hair in a large reddish braid that fell down her neck with a pair of small jade green hairpins, and a light makeup on her face that was barely distinguishable, but elegant. The biggest contrast to her was her lips darkened with black lipstick. (Does anyone dare to build the image?)
- Gasparian10mthKommentiert-Hi, Tony. I am…
- Gasparian10mthKommentiert"Would you ladies like to come in for a cup of coffee? Or vodka? I'm new to Moscow, and I don't have any friends here."
- Gasparian10mthAntwortet auf Nike13K
do you want to make mc a drug addict?
Robin woke up as usual and he didn't open the laptop to play immediately. There was almost no game that could help him right now without bringing out drastic changes in his body. He could play Minecraft for sure as JARVIS had pointed out that there were pretty good things in the game. - Gasparian11mthAntwortet auf Bobbylynn_Monday
the potions are practically made from dozens of toxic herbs, so when an ordinary human being drinks any one he is poisoned, as for the witch his body can handle a few, but he still ends up intoxicated
Witchers' potions posed serious health risks. They were designed for witchers, who undergo mutagenesis in their training. Even then they only use these in battle, as they did have many negative side effects. Also they were toxic and even witchers had a threshold of toxicity tolerance and cannot use multiple potions together.