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Ryuga18040215dKommentiertI'll imagine it as itsuki ohkido
"Is that so. So that little one will be Gary Oak, while this little one will be Itsuki Oak, huh?"- Ryuga18040229dKommentiert
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"The Treacherous Twelve" - Ryuga18040229dAntwortet auf SirFawzi
agreed
"Possibly…" Peter sighed as well as he mirrored her actions. "Okay, so here's what we'll do. We'll both go and quickly take down the Molten Man. Afterward, we'll have to split up. You'll handle Electro, while I'll handle Doc Ock," Peter gave the brief rundown as they both finished changing. - Ryuga1804021mthVerschickt
- Ryuga1804021mthKommentiertCh 721 I’m So Considerate of Director Fury, Will He Give Me a Larger Bonus?
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I like it but at the same time its'sthe inconsistency of the character of the kid that makes the reading experience less enjoyable. Three years of brainwashing is enough for a lifetime and he was brainwashed for eleven years to supress and his emotions. But for some reason everyone around him can sense his emotions. Also as a killer, he is annoyingly naive and pure. He knew damn well that he was a monster bred and captivity to hunt other monsters, so it really shouldn't weaken his convictions especially since that is all he has ever known. I can understand hesitating over life choices. No amount of brainwashing helps that but for him to even hesitate over killing scum is like college sluts saying they have had enough fun and they wanna remain virgins before marriage. Maybe I missed the analogy but the point is story and concept is good, execution is flawed
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You should've removed his existence altogether. Hori without miyamura just feels wrong if he exists
"I will take the strawberry then" I say "So its vanilla for me" He says. We eat the cake it was delicious. "Where did you get it from?" I ask. "The Miyamuras. They have a shop opposite to my apartment, and they are my next door neighbours" He says. - Ryuga1804021mthKommentiert
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Rex looked at the evolved golden Flaaffy and couldn't help but think of a name, Super Saiyan Sheep, appearing in his mind. - Ryuga1804021mthKommentiert
No need for speed force. Elementalization is enough. Reaction time of 1 percent of speed of light is enough as the max theoretical speed. Add something like overclocking mode or something as a new powerup. The idea of forms/transformations on a base form is always cooler
Like Peter gains the speed force or someshit and Gwen actually gets ghost like powers, like becoming intangible, being able to possess people, basically Danny Phantom lol… so should I? - Ryuga1804021mthKommentiert
yes
Like Peter gains the speed force or someshit and Gwen actually gets ghost like powers, like becoming intangible, being able to possess people, basically Danny Phantom lol… so should I? - Ryuga1804021mthKommentiert
There's alot of combos in the Spiderman man game. Just use them
As it fried one of the guys, the lightning ball moved like it had a mind of its own and jumped towards the nearest person before jumping to the next while the ball grew smaller in size and dissipated. - Ryuga1804021mthVerschickt
- Ryuga1804022mthKommentiertCh 111 Chapter 111: From Themyscira with Love
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cool job 😃
With Aoda warily eyeing from the side, the Sand shinobi naturally refrained from clustering, lest they fall en masse to either Kyomu or Aoda. (T/N: I didn't like to use green snake, and I think this should be the snake's name, chinese names are sometime a pain to translate) - Ryuga1804022mthAntwortet auf Hyuga_Tobirama
Yeah, his face looks fatter and he has marks. nope no chance
I hope with this it's a little easier to imagine mc, and can correct those who were imagining him as Tobirama lol. - Ryuga1804023mthKommentiert
Just continue writing bruh
Should I rewrite this novel? Because earlier chapters I used Open AI, around 20+ chapters needed to be rewritten and turned into normal dialogue. - Ryuga1804023mthKommentiertCh 698 A New Employee Who Was Fired by Tony Stark!