SkyLin

5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

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Working on Death Note, five stars for that alone! I hope you don't give up on this book and see it through to the end! +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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There were a few errors in the beginning, but over time the grammar improved, as did the narrative itself. Author! Keep up the good work! I hope you don't give up on such wonderful work.

This sentence is so silly that I didn't want to read any further.