Grenhaer

the first chapter just terribly stinks of incomprehensible (inexplicable) Chinese nonsense, as well as the fulfillment of the wishes of the Chinese author... the author crammed too much nonsense into the first chapter (because of this there are too many questions... because of this the fanfic looks too “raw” ... I hope it will be better next)

some kind of nonsense, diluted with “a ton of water.” We were never told what bad his parents did, or how his body was reduced to such a weak state (at first I thought it was his parents who did it, but it turned out that they died long ago... so who is to blame?) . so far everything here is some kind of inexplicable nonsense.

I’m not even offended (I feel sorry for you, because you’re a pathetic nonentity with no taste... your mother probably fed you crap as a child {literally}).

I regret that I wasted time on this nonsense (I read everything)... the beginning was even interesting, but as things went on it got worse and worse (the last 25% of the book was simply disgusting... in vain I didn’t give up and hoped for the best). The ending here is just disgusting (I have never seen a book so spoiled by such an uninteresting and disgusting ending). In the end everything seems pointless and stupid. This is the worst fanfic in the Naruto universe that I have read in its entirety (although I read the last chapters with one eye and quickly flipped through the chapters... they were too uninteresting and disgusting)