niladrid6

The constant "well, well, well...." Is breaking the flow. First it was only the MC now everyone started doing it too!

It was fine but the constant one dimensional reply he gives with "well, so and so" is annoying. Overdone gimmick. Otherwise it's an okay novel.

To be honest I had high expectations for this. And it did good initially too. But then everything was just shaken and dumped all at once. Now there's no plot, no story, just like taking all your favourite characters from across different anime and putting them into a fight fest. It got derailed. I don't know if AI ruined it or the author thought that characters alone can run the story and it doesn't require plot or any development at all, but now there's nothing to look forward to. A story attracts readers because it has things happening. There's different stages in the MC's life or journey. There's progression to gaining power and all that. That journey is what becomes the story we read, we anticipate what will happen next and all that. Here it started good but then the whole bunch of character unlock happens in bunches and now so many are out there and it's not even adaptive in the sense that magic of one world hasn't even been adapted to haki of this world. It's a mess. If you like Death Battle and like to see different characters fight it out then it can deliver. But if you want to read some story with content then is a waste. It is not even being truthful. Acknologia is an ultimate boss character. The strength, the presence, it really doesn't seem to register. And that Acknologia here is just squaring off with an admiral level strength. Do your research author. There was so much potential but it's ruined. Just another gag novel now.

I just have a question. If you kept getting hit by a rock by someone repeatedly would you forgive them? I know I wouldn't. Everything else is fine but a simp MC is just annoying to read.

Did he lose his system functions for good? It's corrupted and hasn't fixed itself yet. I mean MC without system is still alright but the system makes it earlier to track powers and status.

But did the MC lose his instinct skill for real? The win feels hollow with his skill gone!! Please someone tell me it is just sealed and will be back!

Story is awesome but the chapters 13 onwards are all disjointed. They seem to be skipping chapters in between as they don't connect to the subsequent chapters. 13 to 14 makes no connection and then 15 also feels stranded like what's going on? When is it? Where the sorting? Where's the first day at Hogwarts? These are also all missing!

Yeah, I read till ch 85 but was getting frustrated because Zoro was making no visible progress. He is also still stuck being a 6 yr old. And if haki spreads to others than I just wouldn't like it. It's like the story is stuck. It's not actually an action main story but a slice of life at this point. But the problem is that even if it was slice of life if it focuses on Zoro's training then it'd be good but it shifted from Zoro to Toji as the MC. It's stupid. It had a lot of potential but took a wrong turn just like Zoro.

What name is it and where are you reading it? This one has only 44 chapters right now? Can you share the link?

Everything is cool but what's wrong with dragon ball manga in it? Some Chinese manga in place of THE dragon ball manga? Also power level of rewards are haphazard some could break the story in Naruto world while some are useless. I mean rng is god that's okay but world altering rewards could be given out in batches of tiers. I also like the idea of akamaru continuing as a pet as garurumon through the reward. That option of reward fusion was nice. But then Kurenai and asuma got a complete digimon. It's unbalanced. It's like an intelligent system which evaluates the needs and then gives out reward. But other cases shows it's not so. Story has a lot of potential but the ups and downs has to be managed properly otherwise it will soon break the story and then we wouldn't know where to go from there.