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LLuid1dKommentiertI was confused about there being a Gaboga in DNF... After a bit of searching, turns out its not DNF and its name is not Gaboga. The author meant Project Gaebolg from DFO(Dungeon Fighter Online)
Gaboga was his favorite war machine from the game DNF, "Toxic Milk Powder and Disconnected Warriors," used to battle the ninth apostle, Bakkal, the Dragon King.- LLuid2mthAntwortet auf LLuid
Why is this posted here? I commented this on Best-selling author's chat
Despair: Haha... It could also be the Emperor of the Sea, maybe the Four Emperors Whitebeard. - LLuid2mthKommentiert
??? I thought shes gone? Wasn't she an undercover or got possessed by a system? I remember another chat group member asking why shes missing
Despair: Haha... It could also be the Emperor of the Sea, maybe the Four Emperors Whitebeard. - LLuid2mthKommentiertChapter 104 Leaving, with the new world Hokage
- LLuid2mthVerschickt
It's quite a meh novel. The slight A.U. aside. The gacha and the character personalities are the main issues I have against this. Most of the time the card draws that he gets are trash and just for comedic relief... particularly women's clothing. Unless when it isn't, making you roll your eyes for the blatant asspull that the author just did. And the character personalities and dialogues could really do some work. All the character dialogues and speeches are quite bland, there's barely any difference. It isn't that bad perse... it's just really lacking with variety, and it really sticks out with the numbers of characters in this novel
- LLuid2mthKommentiert"This Earth OL is so bad, I would be better off not playing it!"
- LLuid3mthKommentiertCh 89 Warning!
- LLuid5mthKommentiert
Either way its breakfast
Florida Man Wakes Up to Surprise Addition: Baby or Burrito?! - LLuid5mthKommentiert[Merlin: I'm always in an illusionary state, meaning my actual body's position is always different. Use a distortion spell and then kick me in the balls. I won't be able to cast spells in that state.]
- LLuid5mthKommentiertCh 89 Warning!
- LLuid6mthKommentiert
Fat kid? No no, thats called bulking early
"Do you think I was always this mountain of muscles, kid?" Jackson approached and put his arm around Allen, whispering, "When I was your age, I was fat and not very handsome. Still, no one bothered me. It's a matter of attitude; you have to show a strong face that tells the bully you'll die before submitting." He added with a smile, "Yes, I lost several teeth, but the guy never messed with me again. Bullies don't fear the strong; they fear those who aren't afraid and the crazy ones." - LLuid6mthKommentiert
Since its one piece, this should be Fish-man and not murloc
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - LLuid6mthKommentiert
I can't imagine a serious ninja saying oops in the of a battle... even more so when they're trying to escape.A quick exclamation like "HAH?!!" would've fit much better than oops
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - LLuid7mthVerschickt
It was an enjoyable read. The first dozen of chapters planted an expectation into me on what this novel will be like, which is a world hopping with a bit of insanity... which it delivered. I just wasn't expecting it to fall back on what the harem genre on webnovels is famous (or infamous depending on who you ask) for. Which is cooking(though not much, but it is expected since he is a caretaker), the ever growing number of the female main cast, and once they did it... the REALLY strong fixation on sex. Even though it wasn't what I was expecting, its's a good fic. I highly recommend.
- LLuid7mthKommentiertYo before we start this chapter I want to thank you all for giving this fanfic power stones so as a thank you 3 chapters will be posted on the same day, and since I have a few non English readers who use the translator I sadly have to stop using the font changer so if Ophis is speaking to Victor within the devil bringer it would be ('Like this' )
- LLuid7mthKommentiertThe Country of Grass.