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clark??

i don't see any resemblance between Jared Leto and Timothy chalamet

this is 'hey ren'

i dont really care about ideas as long as what you are rolling with works. but please give pause to emotions and don't just swish through them fast. like that scene in the gas station. if you had taken a moment to elaborate the scene and give some gravitas to the conversation and the underlying tension, it would have been perfect... now I barely remember what had transpired in that scene.

Haori trained under kushina for 3 months, that was when he graduated. Minato came back to take his disciples 3 months ago. So they met 3 months ago. Why is it 1 year now? okay i will stop bothering with these details in a chinese novel.

hidden cloud on hidden sand? they are like at the opposite end of the map.

it felt gay...

what the heck with the constant verfication from Shisui or the yamanaka and why bother explaining to the client? nobody does that. it s cringe.

this fic is gold. can't wait for more. i don't want to spoil it but know that this is a very well written novel that leaves you wanting more.

why use future events to justify Mito's weightage? They don't know anything... if it's only for readers to understand, then that's breaking the fourth wall. we don't need an explanation from you, author/translator. We want the characters to play their role, infer the meaning and justify them...