executionner

A story with a lot of unnecessary, childish and extended dialogues. The conversations annoy me so it's not worth reading from my perspective. Also, the thought of being someone with superman powers is weird. He is already a very strong character. In my opinion, it is an unreadable story because there is no need for training / training processes or pushing himself, so character development is not possible. But despite this, there are people who give it 5 stars. I have to give this score to balance them

which year?

Trash

Hahajahajhaha[img=recommend] Couldn't have been explained better

Baristan and jamie same level but arthur dayne another level you must understand

Please, don't use 'young man' word. Cringe! And Your narrative style is not fluent and you make unnecessary time jumps. It's like watching a video skipping from the 5th minute to the 20th minute and then moving on to the 2nd minute, so can I explain it that doesn't make sense? It would be better if you explain it step by step without unnecessary jumps. I don't see any other problems👍 [img=recommend]

yes, he can easily copy this power from Steve

I dont like nawaki

made in china hydra soldier[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

He is always eating, sitting and no training. This is trash fic