Davlyn

Another great and 'fresh' idea ruined by an overzealous and rather faulty idea of nationalism. MC isn't super Op but rather falls in a fairly acceptable upper middle range. Focuses more on development than fight scenes, at least until chapter 90 or so when I completely lost interest in it. Grammar is pretty good, at least it doesn't detract from the readability. Honestly, if the discriminatory mindset wasn't so blatant, it would probably be a 4/5(would definitely recommend) for me. Unfortunately, as it stands, I have to give it a 2/5 (wouldn't bother wasting my coins).

Well written, nothing much more to add. The slightly irritating parts aren't overwhelmingly so, not too many repetitive fight scenes, smut isn't over the top. Only honest gripe is how annoying the fmls can be, but honestly it barely registers comparatively speaking. Short, sweet, and only mildly irritating at times. Overall 4ish/5; would recommend.

Endearing start, taboo cliches, surprisingly little nationalism. Irritating changes in character and repetitive phrases to accommodate word padding. FML treated as a dumb ditsy weakling. Slow paced with no real improvement, ML ignores system use "Father system" and spends more time speaking sweet nothings to his wife than raising and teaching his children. 20ish Shameless plugs into other books you have to pay for if you want to buy in bulk and get a discount. All of that, while moderately irritating, doesn't detract from what is at minium, a well written book. What does disgust me and ultimately made me regret reading it, was the random weird cultivation turn that ultimately serves no purpose. If I wanted a cultivation hack'n'slash, they're a dime a dozen. I definitely wouldn't be reading a story that purportedly revolves around a 'father system' As for coherent grammatically correct writing, it is on point, so if my complaints sound like 'noting much' to you, you will probably enjoy it.

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I liked library of heavens path, even if it's just a fan fic of a light novel I think i might give it a go... so tired of 7 chapters stupid fight scenes 2 chapters plot development 3 chapters buffing/nerfing mc only to rinse and repeat lmfao

pro; a decent book drawing from many other books painting a simple to understand power structure that makes it easy to digest and interesting enough to draw you in. irrelevant power ups are skipped, and fight scenes are engaging yet succinct enough not to be annoying. cons; mental health issues being prolonged and exaggerated in a rather irritating manner. 13 years and 60 chapters later, a grown man in a child's body still doesn't understand his own self. fiction is a gateway away from the mundane and self evident failures of real life, who wants to escape real life to deal with a man-child. 5/10 for me, easily consumable but nasty plot issues.

Started off good, but plot holes, errors, and silly decisions ruined it. Unless you're really bored, I wouldn't recommend it.

it's decent, right up to 200 where it basically becomes a different book lol... idk if a few chapters got miss placed but it makes no sense after that point

Synopsis, tags, and title; had me expecting op necro Rick rolling skele bangers... I got sad, arrogant, cowardly, stupid mc; no necro skele bangers.......To be fair, it's well written and probably someone's cup of tea; just not mine. 3/5 Left me feeling Rick Ashley'

hadn't even read it and that comment had me roflmao, the whole damn story summed up in one hilarious sarcasm