ShadowH1

I hope to see this story make a comeback one day. But I know better, it's not coming back. And even if it does, I hope it is on another website. Regardless I will still comeback for a few more years for any updates regardless of how unlikely that is. But I am starting to forget the story and I would not be surprised if the author did the same at this point.

Although I have not really read that much of the story and have skipped most chapters, I still believe my review to be fair. From what I can tell so far, the story likes to make great leaps in logic that does not make any sense. Also the writing quality is pretty bad. I mean how come that the last sentence of every paragraph is missing the "." in every chapter so far?

Have you seen black fire?

Are there any normal chains that encloses the world??!?!?!?!?!??!?!