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I love this novel but I have one issue with the author - Even though he has like 150 advanced chapters on patreon why can't upload a few more chapters here for not so wealthy to read barring that he could atleast announce the date of next update at the end of each chapter
dude I've read till chapter 165 the mc is dumb as bricks and extremely naive as well. For example when he easily blurts out everything 12 masters he doesn't talk about yang body or the fact that eating beast cores above organ tempering causes beast to come and fight. Another thing is that you said he used play games but he doesn't even check the game forums for some reason. Anyway but I wanted to know if the story because 200 chapters or not.
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The only thing good about this novel is the idea of the plot that's it as for oyher aspects read below. Main character -Is stupid. eg-He bought cure for his mother then forgot to give her. Story-Full of holes . eg- there are so many cultivators but none can judge others cultivation level its just you can fly yuo are a titled one. Other charecters-they try to act cunning but are forced by author act out the face slapping routine that to not properly. SO PLEASE AVOID READING IT UNLESS YOU ARE A AUTHOR WHO WANT'S TO LEARN HOW NOT TO WRITE A NOVEL