The novel starts off promisingly, introducing us to a protagonist who embarks on an epic journey, battling legendary creatures and ending up in Kanto, right by Professor Oak’s house. This premise, while not entirely original, had the potential to be engaging and exciting. However, the narrative takes a disappointing turn when the protagonist inexplicably gains mastery in multiple disciplines without any apparent effort or training. The author seems to have fast-forwarded through what could have been a compelling journey of growth and learning, instead opting to bestow these skills upon the character as if by magic. The protagonist’s time in the world is stated to be a year, but the development of his skills does not align with this timeline. It would have been more believable and satisfying if the author had shown the character’s progression through hard work and dedication, rather than simply stating that he had become a master. In conclusion, while the novel had an intriguing premise and a potentially interesting character, the lack of believable character development and the rushed narrative left me feeling unsatisfied. I believe the author missed an opportunity to delve deeper into the protagonist’s journey towards mastery, which could have added much-needed depth and realism to the story. Yes I used an AI

Y’all cooked

I read this then read the next line saw your comment came back to like this xD

I haven’t read a fallen god for a while but this fic pretty much copy’s everything though it is a little different

i think you missed a chapter or 2?

Hey I was wondering if you were going to post a update schedule

I would change my the rating to one I just read up to the mokoto pulling him over part and all I have to say is really?

The story is all over the place and doesn’t really flow that well he becomes way to op for no good reason if if there was more development with it too make it flow better I would have given this a better ratinng. Story wise it’s a good idea but your not really executing it well for example at any point in the story there is a conflict you resort to mind raping people (the doctor, kiwi). the characters need more emotion literally just npcs.

Honestly really scummy thing to do this author has this problem where people have stolen there work before and ask them to take it down ask be fore you do

Honestly that's a stupid reason its your story ...

I almost missed out on the rest of the story lucky I read the authors note

Thank you

The story at first seems to have a good concept but as you continue to read you find it starts to get stale there’s no real goal other then “hey i want to get stonger for justices”

Isn't this just the same as Fluer?

Called it

Hey not really a manga suggestio but a voteing sugges tion instead of having us do +1 make a comment in the comme nts and go by the likes on ur comment makes it fair

The story was interesting then i read that he gives away 70% of the profits to goblins No one I mean NO one in there right mind would give more then half of there profits for little to no benifts

The owner of this fanfiction has asked that people do not post this onto other websites please take it down Tank you. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D