NotAProperUsername

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by doing what ? stealing other's works and claiming them as your own? you even set up a P A T R E O N for a already completed fic. how stupid do you think other people are ?

This fic is a blatant FULL COPY of And Nothing of Value Was Lost (ASOIAF SI) by FENESTRUS on SpaceBattles. if you want to post a fic write your own or atleast credit the original author and get their permission before posting. Stop stealing other people's work, you thief.

absolutely true i went at it without plan or plot with too much detail and junk i was burnt out at the end i am writing a new fic though check it out

i think even the entity would get shafted in 40k

read it. it is one of the few bright spots in the current desolate era of boruto

So far your 'story' is a blatant copy of 'Path of Ruin' available on spacebattles. I dont know if you have some changes planned or if you would keep on shamelessly copying another person's work like creatively bankrupt xerox machine. But anyway I hope you improve and atleast credit the person and the work you are copying from.

I like your work. Some of your stories are not that well written. Some characters are poorly designed. Their motives flawed and their relationships feel wrong to me. But I see small but consistent improvement through all your fics, which is much appreciated. I love the cyberpunk genre specifically the dark future storyline by Mike Pondsmith. After seeing your past works, I hope this fic will be at least on par with them, if not better than your past fics.