Erelbrinx

They captured gang leader easily but than he escaped as easily. We get all that talk about how they can't face the pirates just to be forced to move without horses... It just feels forced.

I mean there are laws preventing wizards from disclosing their magic to muggles too, isn't there? So, it doesn't really affect anything.

The future changed from the day 1 . You can't have 3 dragons and still expect it to play out the same way. That would ruin the story.

Yeah, but you would at least wouldn't do the criticism in front of matriacrh out of respect for her.

Also, the grammer is not bad at all. Not to the extend that you would bother to leave a comment about it.

Since I started reading Mtl, i became immune to bad grammer. For those who complain, I suggest they start reading some mtl.

You would think you need a light for a shadow to exist, right?

I hate mind control. I think it kills the story if used to obtain loyalty, manipulation, and such. It just leads to an uninteresting plot.

So it was the color of his eyes that she found a problem with. I thought she meant the perverted look in Mc's eyes lol. I was like how degenerate the Mc has to be to look that way even in a newborn baby.

Love the chapter. It is much better than Oberyn simply going along with Mc's wishes one way or another. Oberyn was simply looking for adventure, not to submit to a rather intelligent 5-year-old. I'm waiting to see what kind of butterfly effect this will have in the future.