Adypoker

Isn't charging money for fanfiction illegal?

I was enjoying myself with this story until he lost all special effects and gave them all to an avatar... Why would anyone enjoy getting weaker?

This is so infuriating... It should be something that makes him stronger, but instead he is getting weaker and the avatar stronger... And if you think he isn't getting weaker, then tell me how does he not having access to the special abilities of his skills not make him weaker?

BS! They're his skills! Why the heck does he lose their effects?!?

And Odin just killed himself...

Kyle Crane?

Wrong Chapter? There's something missing between the last chapter and this one.

Supposedly, the reason why they are rare is because they can quickly grow stronger through eating other Monsters/Beasts, which makes them hated by every race, and that can be seen in the "eight-spider lances", which can steal the qi from anything it kills.

Wrong Chapter AGAIN!

Except for the fact that you should be immune to rule-based powers, which should mean that even at the start you shouldn't have needed to use the key to unlock your gift when it was sealed in the laboratory...