Martial_Pursuit

Did you even read he was a professional fighter, now couldn't e en beat a kid, Martial skill is the same as long as there's pair of leg and arm.

Why compare you writing with other fanfic that comparing trash with trash, just because it's a fanfic doesn't mean it couldn't be well written. Doesn't need professional or polished just well written structurally, the comments is not tearing you down its a criticism wanting you to improve.

Boring and very dragging, the grind can be fun to read if it is better written but its felt like a chore reading it and MC chakra is way to nerf.

the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.

Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.

ah yes all Asian are Chinese, low IQ reply you.

are you dumb not understand a context of a joke?

story is very dull, name dropping here and there, the translation is good and the update is fast enough. just too boring for me others may enjoyed it but it's not for me.

where exactly did you get that coalition of Iwa,Kumo & Kiri bring destruction to Uzu in canon do provide a link. if using the map of Naruto then Yugakure, Takigakure, Kusagakure or Amegakure is fst more likely.

bloated cast of harem member, slow story repetitive story. green hat this green hat that getting boring. how about use the system to help the protagonist you like at least there's variations.