Darius_Chromwell

Phenomenal work, I’m a huge fan of Harry Potter fanfics and to throw in some Witcher aspects especially in such a clean way that it feels seamless has made this one of my new favorites, i look forward to seeing more from this masterpiece!

I've not even read the fanfic yet and you have already earned a 5 Star review from me simply based on the Synopsis! GG my good fellow.

I’d say that this is about 30% fanfic and 70% crack fiction… there is so much breaking the fourth wall in this it’s not even funny. Don’t get me wrong I love a good gamer fiction and I like the detail that went into describing the stats and skills, but this story doesn’t really seem to take itself seriously enough to be readable in the long term.

Until the original poster explains what rule they’re referring to here I’m just going to assume it’s something to do with having multiple protagonists. Still not a reason to leave a bad review just be like me and don’t read it.

Great job, you’ve got me wanting to play Pokémon again. Oh and the fanfic is okay too I guess… 😜

I do love me a good danmachi fanfic, I like the system concept but the MC’s whole mysterious backstory is a little too forced and cringy at times for me.

D*mn, this is just way too edgy for me. I mean hell you should have just named the MC sasuke.🐧🐧🐧

Why does it feel like the main character is not actually the main character but rather the comedic relief… where can I go to read Mira’s side of the story if anyone is actually the main character then it’s her!

When did Webnovel start allowing fanfics to lock chapters! I don’t care if it’s unlockable by watching a ad for 10 chapters this book has over 600 chapters, that means I’ll have to watch 60 ads to read the whole thing. I’m a speed reader so I’ll be watching ads longer than actually reading the novel!

I love group chat systems, but after about five chapters of reading only about the MC getting gifted overpowered ability after overpowered ability I felt like I was reading a grocery list of abilities rather than a fanfic…