LordVoid

Por que no tempo que escrevi a sinopse, a Web gostava de dar erro com trabalho de outras línguas.

Também posto no spirit

Silverwing.

He said silver shine, so it can only be Dreamfire or Silverwing, but Silver is not in the dragon pit, she is with Vomithor, but who knows if the author changed that, since there was that little part at the beginning of the chapter with the point of view of Alysanne Targaryen. But seriously, it's still disappointing, Dreamfire doesn't seem to be one of the biggest or most powerful, Silverwing, can still be considered a step behind Vermithor, the dragon is literally known as bronze fury, I know your choice is predictable, but it's the one that but it makes sense too. I must also say that Alicient, as a pair, is very dull, without her, there would be no civil war, which will leave the story very short, as happened before.

I have two fics in progress and one Marvel story completed.

Please, Vermithor for the MC's dragon, he is strong and old, besides he is known as bronze wrath, perfect fit.

I'm leaving this work at this point. This entire arc of fights in the arenas was the final straw, this constant exchange of points of view in such a short chapter just leaves me confused, in addition to taking away the emotion of the battle, something already weak. And now we have a clone that bleeds.... Instead of creating a chapter to tell a story, you wrote the chapter just to tell a joke. What kind of idiot leaves an arena knowing his fight is next, to buy food in person instead of sending a clone instead? In any case, good luck to the author, I'm just leaving the work out of personal taste, I hope you continue with the good story, see you.

I really like your stories, but this one started out really bad. The "friend" literally ended his relationship and dragged him into this mess and he does nothing and ends up accepting... What a pointless thing.

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How rare it is to find a story from the Buffy universe, and you know what's even rarer? A main character aware of how heavy the fact of future knowledge is, really caring about helping, and not going around collecting women or gaining power for the sake of just having power, you were perfect in that, author. If I could give a simple opinion, I would add a little more development to the main character, I'm talking about the little things, in which house does he die? Where does he live? Little things like that that make things more important.