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Glad to have you back. This has been one of the few Twilight related thing I actually like. I would hate to see it end prematurely like so many other stories here.

Love it. Glad to see that this story hasn't been forgotten.

I just binged this story and I was so sad when I got to the end because I expected there to be more. 😭😂🤣 Keep up the great work 😁👍

When I read "I was board." It had me rolling! I love it!😂🤣

Yeah, I am done. This story getting a little too stail and inconsistent for my taste. The power scaling is off and there is not much change or sense of consequence to Peter's actions. The thing that always makes Spider-Man relatable was the Parker Luck, the bad luck that always comes up whenever he is doing well in life. Be family drama or villains, nothing can always go your way 100% of the time no matter the prep time or planning. That goes double for scaling up Peter's powers as well, as more powers means more responsibility and I am seeing none of that here. I understand the power fantasy, but I am not on this sight for that.

I am all for the teaser at the end and the whole daughter thing, but it could have been handled differently to make more sense. Such as later if life so that the whole emanation thing wouldn't have been an issue. You were also planning for an A.I. assistant that was better than Tony's, so how did it turn into a daughter? That just came out of nowhere for me. I would have personally wait until after the college bits before introducing a daughter, even then I would have gone for something a little more cannon to the Spider-Man comics. As I remember that in one comic, I can't remember the which off the top of my head, that Spider-Man is brought to a hospital in the city to help a dieing little homeless girl. Since she had no family, the hospital thought to call in Peter because the box she was living in was filled with Spider-Man themed stuff. But sadly, in the end there was nothing he could do for her. I would have had her cured, join the family, named her Peni Parker and gave her a Spider-Man themed mech-suite capable of riveling Stark tech. Yes, this would be a version of the same girl from the comics and movie. Anyway, keep up the good work. I am looking forward to seeing what will come after the family bits.

I have been looking forward to seeing when you would get back to this story. It has to be one of my favorite Mass Effect stories I have seen so far. I hope you will keep up the amazing work.😁👍

I would definitely say that you make individual pieces of equipment, weapons or even accessories as conduits for the stones. While Reed Richards plans for the Council of Reed's and the Illuminate fell through in the comics, it was at least better than letting the stones fall into hands not capable of using them properly or would use them for evil. This way there would be 6 powerful individuals wielding the power and not just one. A person, especially a human, with absolute power without the resolve to use it properly will just become a slave to that power. On the other extreme we have superman, he has infinite potentual power but he only limits himself to below 1% of what he should be capable of. I always thought that brining back Nemesis and the Ego stone or even the individual consciousness of each stone was a better option than just letting the stones float freely through the universe. That way there would be a new cosmic being/s for that universe that would insure the safety of the stones and even help maintain the balance of that universe they are in. But if you would like my ideas, these are all off the top of my head without much thought. Soul stone: scythe or katana, as it would fit a while grim reaper agent of lady death thing for deadpool. Reality stone: necklace for Wanda/Scarlet Witch to help with her whole power set and chaos magic. Space stone: Tony, Peter or quicksilver. Tony because he made interesting use of it in the comics by using it to power his core reactor. Peter because he could use it instead of just portals. Quicksilver just to make him the marvel version of the flash. Mind stone: An accessory for jean gray or professor x, for obvious reasons. Mainly jean so that she could learn to control the phoenix. Power stone: Thor, doctor strange, hulk or drax. Thor to enhance his godly power further. To power his magic instead of needing the connection to the dark dimension. Hulk to become the breaker of worlds. Drax so that he could actually kill Thanos himself for having his family killed. It would also fit with why he was crated in the comics in the first place. Time stone: quicksilver or peter. Quicksilver because of the same reason for the space stone, but probably more fitting because the speed force is basically a form of time manipulation. Peter could use it to always have an advantage over his enemy out side of his spider sense.

Yeah, Reven is going to be sincerely disappointed with how modern Jedi fight. 😂🤣

I have just finished from chapter one yesterday and i am hooked. I just find it sad that Neo's biotics hasn't been developed for several chapters. Almost like it is being neglected in favor for his tech at the moment just to show off how overpowered it is. I would also like some clarification on why Neo has forgotten that he was told that Tali liked him as more than a friend. I could understand avoiding the subject with his constant training and tinkering, but not completely forgetting the conversation when his whole deal is learning from new experiences, essentially a perfect memory and sensing other peoples emotions.