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fangman1yrVerschicktIt was good before the reveal of the devil fruit of mc its just the ability of the fruit is complicated and its going in the same pattern as the other one piece fanfiction i read, because the ability of the fruit is complicated it will fall in the same category of the other story of excuse of rewrite or drop or loss interest or no idea to navigate the story sooner or later it will definitely happen im sure of of it so sorry
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I agree it's like your asking the fanfiction god a really big writer block curse you'll just self destruct at this point sooner or later and another story falls in the same excuse of rewrite or drop or loss interest or no idea where to navigate the story. because you made the ability of the fruit complicated i suggest rewrite chapter make the fruit simple with big possibilities.
This chapter might release a lot of controversies. I will accept any kind of criticism about the devil fruit or the story but if you are just going to write a hate review because of one chapter, then I kindly ask you to drop it. - fangman2yrKommentiertCh 69 Ch. 69 Slashing Dog and Naughty Kitty (R-18)
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Madara speech
"Wake up to reality. Nothing goes as planned in this accursed world. The more time you live in this world the more you realize the pain of existing in this world. This world is going to keep trying to crush you. " I said and looked her directly in the eyes. She was shocked. " Only one thing can make you break from this vicious path. You need strength. Enough that responsibilities won't become a burden on you. Enough to shoulder everything and still keep laughing. And I am offering you that Rias Gremory. Will you get up and become stronger or keep crying there for the rest of your near infinite life. If you can't believe in yourself, believe in me. I swear that I'm going to make you in that person." - fangman2yrKommentiertCh 1 [113] The End of the War
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Waiting for the chapter
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Neat
"...Did he just call me Tamashi?" Takato wondered aloud, face drawing up in affront. - fangman3yrKommentiertDieses Kapitel wurde gelöscht
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Dun dunn dunnnn
Dieses Kapitel wurde gelöscht - fangman3yrKommentiertCh 9 Training Camp
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