Mrblack45

Plus the dynamic of the girls going with Karl beast would be weird. I just can't see that working out.

What ! thor getting a dragon not a member of the group.

author the don't kill human request is stupid, Humans are sometimes worse than the monster they hunt.

Author now MC needs a second weapon similar to this one, So he can use it for Shields,dual weird or unique items for combat or missions.

Warhammer would be a good second weapon paired with his sword.(basically just a one handed hammer with a spike on the opposite side. Made for armored enemies.) So MC can use his speed to inflict damage to armor body parts and finish them off with precision sword strikes to vulnerable areas.

What about The tattoos Karl was going to use for himself.

(MC female helpers) elf lady- magic, and spells Leader. Cat girl- Air, and space aerodynamics Leader. Blue Haired girl- Combat, and training Leader.

Just saying what your book pacing was trash, not trying to get you to be perfect. But up to the chapter was similar to old school batman fights. Maybe you need to leave your feelings out of this and see I only give constructive criticism throughout my web novel history.

It's hard to keep interest in the fights after that.

Sorry Author but I have been, holding my opinions until now. But the pace or flow of the story is like an arcade game. The first problem was the bandits at the beginning, The second was his assassination attempt, All of this felt like throwing crap at a fan and hoping it sticks. Plus the minute he can fight 2 ranked beasts was said, and the next second he can't do anything against a 2nd ranked creature. It's hard to keep interest and the fights.