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it's ridiculous that the author chose Keira as the antagonist here. Like he doesn't know she'll be one of the biggest actress in that decade. She also lead in 2 movies in 2001.
I get it now
mass release pls
did his shooting skill leveled up before the last shot?
MC was so patronizing towards Alex and it irked me a lot. I haven't read any Modern Family fic where authors didn't want to bang the young girls.
tftc. also
a well-written fic, but I'm at chapter 40 yet MC is still a toddler. That's fine and all since the dialogues and interactions were great, but the slow release speed would easily wane your interest. My main complaint about MC is he hesitates a lot, in the world of One Piece that signifies a lot, he's the weakest willed among the ASML Squad, and this is his 2nd life.
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