Nitrox2

Problem with he/she of Ling Luochen

Wasn't magikarp shiny ? Why the blue Gyarados ?

When I think of his gravity magic, i can't not think of the possibility of ... SHINRA TENSEI !!!

Why did you bring a fucking system at chapter 26 ? It was so out of the blue and completly unnecessary... You should work more on your character development. 20 chapters in and we know practically nothing of the past of the MC, his attitude, his goal, his resolve etc ... The world background was too rushed. He stayed 1 year in the mortal world and we know nearly nothing (cost of living, his relationship with other character, his living condition etc...).

Extrême confusion of the name of the professor…

The problem is not the pace, it's the information in each chapter. If the chapter don't bring significant development to your story, increase the pace of just time skip.

Why the fuck would you post an MTL translation on this site without editing ?

excellent fanfiction. It lack a bit of character and world development but if the story continu, I hope it will be resolved.

Can you create a patreon account please ?

I looked for copper and I found gold. Extremely good story with 14 chapters. I hope the autor will release chapter with the samequality in the future !