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Always wondered why no one just made the shadow clone not disabled. For example if the clone jutsu can change based of skill (exact copy of a person , deformed, not the exact copy etc) and your not trying to fool somebody like using it for house work, why not make a shadow clone that has two hands if you lost a limb, or one that can walk if your paralyzed. They're made of charka why not make them fully functional.

Pretty good, great quality writing and a smart MC, its only 14 chapters for far but instant 5 stars.............................................

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Its definitely one of the better percy jackson fanfics,.................................................................................... .............................................

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100% Luna,

Its really good, its not five stars only because I want more .................................................

I only took a break from reading this at Chapter 6 to give it the 5 stars it deserves. So far its a great crossover with a smart MC...

I thought the same thing when I saw the authors note lol, I'm going to let it pile up. The stories good, and Its just my personal preference but too many fillers and side quests.

Its GOOD ..............................................................................................................................................

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Isn't this almost word for word the second chapter of the "Brightest Doom"?

Story is great, its written well, and updates consistently so far. Story is great, its written well, and updates consistently so far.

Couldn't even tell this was being translated, Grammar is 5 stars easy. MC doesn't have any knowledge of the anime, normally not a fan of that but it's written really well here. Also Vector Manipulation as QUIRK is explained and used really well.

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