PatriarchZigen

This was the last straw for me, best of wishes and luck for the rest of the novel.

I never understood the point of writing this like that instead of using that information in the novel you're ✍.

As I told you last time, if you are in a hurry don't post it, work on it and post it only when its perfectly done or else this will hurt the quality of your novel...But if you don't care about your work then do what you want.

Bending* not magic.

Water Magic ?

The Dumbledore obssession trope to trying to find conspiration has always been cringe but I understand why its used.

Yeah my bad, I actually got it wrong.

Europe ?

I don't like the fact that he's being treated like a fn 12 year old when he's actually like 30...This is just wierd to be honnest.

Take your time to write your stuff, if you don't have time and you're thinking of releasing something half done just don't do it and wait for the right time to post your chapter instead. Not saying it was bad but if you had to rush it then its not worth for the quality of the novel to suffer a hit.