KingOlaf

it breaks my heart to hear about the mother even when she is trying to mend what had broken and I wish there be a way it can be mended for both of them.

this feels like spare me great lord novel it has similar points like the system the sister even the the school part

a brick of doom, why a brick did could have used a fan a dagger a pen beside all the other obvious weapons......but a brick

chakra and chi are kinda the same thing under different countries 😅 so there should be chakra in marvel tho it should be less in city like new York and aplenty in places where nature is at its peak

should the fourth hokage not be in control of the village 🤔 now it feels like both of them are dead in the story and should naruto not be born in like 2-4 years from then 🤔

I can't read more because of an network issue that is only in for this book so I cant unlock more chapters

hammer since he's blacksmith it would be good to use his strength with a warhammer or halberd

how is he going to explain how he got the ship to his family/team since technically there are no advanced space ships in the that time that are known to earths forces.

so has tony disappeared and reappeared in 2008 and came iron man or em I rong

it feels a bit like I'm reading the first 3 chapters and if I'm being honest it feels less a story as to more of a report in every mission, like shooter games there many mishaps and some die,but in all chapters so far have been so immortal like 100% mission success is hard in reality I would think.