Yap28

author, what's the original title?

i stop reading after chapter 4 due to the author inconsistency, let me make my point here the mc should be older than haku, but it keeps getting changed from older bro, to lil bro. at first I thought oh ok then i read it wrong or prob the author changed it, but then he became the older bro again wtf, if this fanfic isn't translated, please be consistent bro, make a few notes or something, stop changing things at ur will, but honestly it got potential for a good read, idk bout the update stability so i'll just give it 5 stars for now

so shou is 7 or 4? the big bro? or the lil bro? is this translation?

should be second, third war is the time where minato rise

why not change his name a bit bro 😭

rightt?? i thought so too XD

still cryin no matter how many times i see this scene, no matter how many times i read it 🫠

yeah i've read it there too, and i'm planning to change the character to SI at that time, honestly it's pretty good if you compare it to the other chinese naruto fanfic

fck wrong account...